#37 A Heart
I'm 14 and in love. I wrote this poem for a friend but realized how much of what I had said was about how I felt for the same guy as her.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems
A Heart
A heart is not a play thing A heart is not a toy But if you want it broken, Just give it to a boy. Boys never give their hearts They play you for a fool They wait until you give your heart And then they play it cool You think that when he whispers That special someone is you In his heart he means it And every word is true But you had better think Don't believe his words just yet For if you do my dearest Heartbreaks all you'll get. Don't ever fall in love my friend You see it doesn't pay Love it causes broken hearts It happens every day Love is beautiful, but it can hurt, it's true. You'll think you're dying before its through I can tell you all of this I know Because I fell for the same guy as you! |
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1999
Erin Young
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76 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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joani love love love dis poem, its exactly how i fell ritee now !
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aubreyThis poem brings back alot of memories of when I got my heart broken. It hurt worse than anything I've ever been through. But I'm over that and I'm glad. This poem is such a big reminder of those days and im glad they are over
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kenyettathis poem is so interesing and touchin
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Lucyomg! love your poem its awesome its so true i got played once and it sucked awesome poem!
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MeganI really like the poem. Ive had alot of heartaches! Love is a wonderful thing but at the same time so painful. Well anyways just thought id tell you that i enjoyed it.
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tashahey i love your poem for real cause ibeen hurt to by this boy and i was so sad it was hard for me to trust a another guy but now this one boy likes me so i hope he is better than the last one cause if not man i dont no what to do and i really like this boy
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AbigailI love this poem
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gladisi really loved your poem! your really good!
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tanishathis same thing happened to me and im only i wish i dont have to feel the way i feel right now for life.
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GriseldaGREAT JOB ERIN! I LOVE THIS AND I THINK I KNOW HOW U R TALKING BOUT (AMANDA & RUBEN) I HOPE IM RIGHT, AND I LOVE THIS POEM, I DIDNT KNOW A GIRL LIKE U COULD WRITE THINGS LIKE THIS!
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LaShawnthis is a great poem and it is true
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BrittanyYour poem is absolutely awesome! I love it! Your poem helped me get over my heartbreak thank you for your awesome advice and poem! GREAT JOB!
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Marionit was good
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teesathat is very true to cuz i fell in love with a guy then he turn around and said he like my sister after i told him i loved him and that is all i got was a broken heart so all yall people that has not fallen in love yet dont tell he tells u or pooves it
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whitneyThis is a great poem! im going threw trhe same thing at the verry moment!
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NotaThe night is young. Don't give up on your dreams of finding that special someone who can work for you, so you don't have to. Oh cool I just rhymed. I'm a poet too. Well there I go again blabbering on about how I could be something. I just need to find that man so I don't have to worry about it. Do you think I can? YES RHYME NUMBER 2! GO ME GO ME. Oh and don't forget to fly high into the blueberry sky. Bloodwake the hospitable signing off.
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DavidI think its a great poem, although, not every guy is like that. Granted, most of them are, but i mean, im a femminist, and i know that i could never hurt someone i loved. My girlfriend and love each other, and i would never ever hurt her.
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KaTrinaHey i realy understand every word you have said in this poem because me and this guy had been dating for a very long time since i was 12 and i am now 15 and we have broke up and went back out so many times that i have lost count but i am pretty sure it is almost 50. but we have recently broke up and he is seeing other people but we still talk on the phone and it hurts me so bad because he talks about them in front of me and i try and i try not to let him think that it dont hurt me but the other day i lost it and we stoped talking for a little while. but now we are talking again i need help getting over him but i just cant. but yes to some it all up love is stupid as hell! please everyone that has not fallin in love dont because it will hurt you each and every day of your life until you find someone else and then it will happen again and again but you just have to live through it day by day. thanx for listening every one love always katrina:(
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Sandihey gurl i know what ur talkind about b/c i'm been turn it and that is all a boy does. i like ur poem. Keep it up.
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claudiaI think this is very true and i right love poems to so i know what you mean.
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bethanythis poem has helped me thanks x
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Minchonnethis was so good i vote for it good job!
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VickyI really like this poem because I'm kinda going through a break up myself. I may be heartbroken but I will heal. one day. This poem put things into perspective for me.
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ashleyi had a boy that i was in love with for about 6 months and he was my first for everything. he pretended to love me for about 2 months when really he didnt anymore. he didnt know how to tell me it was over but when he found out he got me pregnant then he up and left me. so he did play with my heart a whole bunch. he finally dropped it and broke it.
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reaI can't believe a great poem such as this can be written by someone so young. Beautifully written and a lot can be learned from reading this.
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Brittany Le AnneOMG GIRL! I absolutly love it! Keep writting, and don't give up on boys just yet!
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autumni really liked that poem becuase i had my heart broken by a boy that i thought he loved me but he didnt he just played with my heart but now i am over him but he tell's his friend that he is srroy and he didn't mean what he did to me at all
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amandagrl you know what you r talking about i know what you r saying i am going threw that right now
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SaraI really like this poem, but i have liked it since the first time i heard it which was when i was in the fith grade.
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MorganI am voteing for this poem because I have given my heart away several times to a boy and got it played every time. SO I know exactly where you are coming from.
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juliahey that is kinda me too and im with this guy and he is always hurting me making me cry well i really like it and i sent it to a few people to read
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Stepheni just wanted to say that it was a good poem but i myself have to disagree with you i have a girlfried named shelly and i gave her my heart and dhe gave me hers i would never break her heart or any other girls heart because that is not what i belive in
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Cindythis poem is way too cool. it's very true. i thought i had the best guy ever but it turns out the same.
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kiriaI Think that this is a well writen poem. And don't listen to those hater.
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jodi annthis ia good poem
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SarahThis poem is a good one and it really tells the truth though you think love is great its not the greatest when you get hurt. Ive did it many times one after another and its hard when your addicted but girl youll make it through.
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Angel Mariethis poem is so ture. every word is ture. it's really good
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andiyou didnt write this poem. i heard this poem when i was a freshman in 1996. that would have made you 8!
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shshey gurl, this is a great poem
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Britthey that was a really good poem. but i think it wouldve made it better if you really had been the one to write it. ive seen that poem on many other websites, and in books from awhile ago. it says you published it in 1998, but ive seen it books before that. but i give you an A for effort. next time though, i suggest you really do write your own poem istead of going with what someone else wrote. that might work a little better for you.
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Carolineum. this is on 1 on my email forwards. so obviously u dint write this.
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Samithis poem really helped me and my friend get over our heartbreaks. so I think that this is a great poem
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EssieGirl, this is the best poem or atleast one of the best I have ever read. It really touch my heat and I almost begin to cry because I can honestly say I can relate. KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITTING!
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Ji understand you have had boy problems i have had many but. one day you will find your true love and you will hate boys no more
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innathis poem, made me rialize that real love never goes away. i went through the same thing, i'm still doing through it
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JenOMG I went through the exact same thing as you!!!~And sadly enough, me and her haven't made up officially yet and it happened 9 months ago. I just wanted to tell you that you're not alone.
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LauraAww, this poem is so cute and it's totally the truth. My friend and I have had some pretty bad experiences with boys and we're always talking about how love is just a game to most of them, this definitely sums up how we feel! It's wonderful, good job!
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StephanieIt was a really good poem! I liked the part where it said that if you want your heart broken, just give it to a boy! That was cool.
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butterflyi like this..it make me realize so much..
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TLHey......not all guys are like that.but...I wouldn't blame you for feeling like that about guys.I'm a guy(and I'm not gay)....but i probably understand how you feel about guys.Most guys do the dumbest things to girls but their to tough to say the are sorry.so...i'm sorry for everything a huy has ever done to you.....great poem
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nanagood poem, i feel ya. but put more heart into it and watch it come out better. believe me, i'm a poet
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hayleyIt's oh so true. and oh so heartbreaking.
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EvaI really like this poem because it relates to me so much!
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Lindseythis poem is verry ture.i lke it the same thing just hapend to me a week and to days ago.it is the best poem that i ever read about a guys howall they know how to do is break your heart.i will defentley send this poem.
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AmberI loved that poem it really tells the truth all you do is get heart broking
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JennI really liked this poem and it really tells the truth
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aprilI loved your poem. It is very very very true.And I believe if some females read it they would feel different about their relationships I know I do. Cause my heart has been broken,but now it has healed. And I know not to give it to a boy anymore.
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TaraYour poem is exactly how I am feeling right now. I really enjoyed it.
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Jenthatwas the best
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beaperfect!!! u did the best !! nice 2 hear u , many thanks
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jessicaTIGHT TIGHT, i love the ending!
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DanielI was really impressed by this poem and really liked it. Most of all the way it ended.
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whitneyThis poem is so true and i love it. I have givin my heart to one specific guy and he took it and broke it like it was nothing. Thanks so much it love this poem
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AliceIts funny and true at the same time. Lots of people can read it and say. Yea! Thats right!" Great! Keep up the good work!!!! ;O)
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CrazyAngelGood poem~True too
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TraceyThis is poem is the truth about having a relationship with a loser guy! If he dumps you and then wants you back after doing wrong SAY NO!
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JessicaThis peom kicks A**!!! I love it!!!
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Brethe poem is sooo true it's scary!
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AshleyThis is the best poem I have read in a long time!! It really speaks the truth about teenage boys! I am glad someone had the nerve to say it!
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kristinI keep taking this certain guy back and i think i will take your poems advise. He can kiss my a**!
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kwI enjoyed this poem. It really explains about how boys take your heart for granted and then break it.
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CrystalI really like it. If I ever get dumped, I will be sure to e-mail him this poem.
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chrisit waz cool poem
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JenniferThis poem says the truth!!!!!!1
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holthis poem got to me I have a couple of friends that went through the same situation!!!
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mattyea and girls are so innocent ,they'd never break a heart, come on, nice poem though, the comments wound me up tho
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