This Guy by Sleeping Beauty

#58 This Guy

When situations happen that affect our relationships, we are left to think and think until we have become sick from thinking about it and trying to work it out.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems

This Guy

by Sleeping Beauty

There is this guy I thought I knew.
I really felt a dream come true,
With soft brown hair,
And sparkling eyes,
A caring stare,
And taller than me - what a surprise.
When we talk,
In his eyes I could get lost,
But there's also something in his walk,
And his personality I'd take at any cost.
He makes me feel perfect,
Laughing and alive;
Though getting in touch is quite hectic.
Why I keep going could never be described,
Your loving arms around me,
The taste of your sweet kiss,
So whole when I am with thee -
Apart from you I can't help but miss,
But now I feel different.
I heard of another girl you haven't let go,
And I sit here and lament.
What is going on - could you please let me know?
I cannot begin to understand,
You seem to like me so much,
And now you've got me in the palm of your hand,
In your grasp and free to touch.
These past days I have hoped with all my heart
That she is with you I prayed not.
I'm not fond of such a part,
But the reason I care is because I like you a lot.

59 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Amy

i love it it reminds me about my boyfriend
kirty

i flippin love this poem yo! dis same damn thing happen to me fo real. dat is wack
nikki

wow yer poem is off the chain! i loved it! its weird b'cuz the way you describe this guy is the exact same way this guy that hurt me way bad looks like! well if you have any more poems that u dont have on here please email them to me i love yer work! KEEP IT UP!X!X!
April

I really love ur poem! This reminds me of this guy i like, Josh, he loves his x. But he can't get it through his skull. Keep up the good poems.
Kayla

this poem really touched me it reminded me so much of my boyfriend b 4 we got together this girl is very talented. brava. keep writing great poems like this very touching.
kari

AWWW ! That poem sounded just like my boyfriend and I. i loved it , it really touched a spot in me! who ever wrote this did a GREAT job~!~!~
silvia

i loved this poem cuz its exactly wahat is happening 2 me
evonna

this' really good!
pink baby

I LOVE IT!. its truley touching. its happening to me at this very moment!.
sARAH

I LOVED THIS POEM IT REMINDED ME OF A GUY THAT I REALLY LIKE AND I WISH THAT HE LIKES ME BACK! THIS POEM IS LIKE EXCATLY HOW I FEEL!OMG THIS IS A GREAT POEM!
summer

This poem is exacly what is going on in my life with my boyfriend.
Dana

this is a wonderful poem when i read this poem it made me wanna cry because i have just meet this woderful guy and he is still in love with his ex girlfriend but dont wanna be with her but this poem reminds me of all of this
Jenele

This poem is really sweet. it's a poem that could touch anyones heart. i know it touched mine!
sameeha

I loved this poem mainly because it reminds me of the guy i like. the description is exactly what he looks like but he broke up with me last thursdayand i was devastated and the worst was that he didn't even say why. so I really love this poem! Its great.
Brittany

That was . I cant put it in words. All I can say is that I feel the same way. Thanx for speakin it!
amanda

this poem really reminds me of mi true luv Alex!
nicole

I LOVED THIS! Wow!
tara

ure poem is sooooo sweet, it reminds me of this guy i like but he has a gf. i wish that ure poem related to me
Yelena

I love this poem, because its almost about my boyfriend, he have brown hair and sparkling eyes. But there is one thin, he is short he is 5 and 10 feet tall, and i am 6 feet tall. But there is no problem for me he is my dream and my soul. I leave with him and we have so much in common.
lamia

i really liked this poem that she wrote she really told this guy how she really felt about him and there is nothing wrong with her bein in love with someone that already has another girl before that he didnt even tell her about that other girl and he was even kissing her so its not her felt it is all his
Brianna

This poem is fantastic. I fel the same way about a boy name Ulises we were friends for awhile but then we got so emtional that we started flirting and then poof we started going out. We have been dating for one year now. Great poem keep writing them
angela

SUPER GREAT POEM! ITS LIKE ME AND YOU WERE THE SAME PERSON SAME THING HAPPENED TO ME WITH THIS GUY (NOE) I LIKED HIM SO MUCH THAT I DIDN'T WANT TO ACCEPT THE TRUTH . BUT ANYWAY GREAT POEM.
Jennifer

This poem is wonderful I was getting tears in my eyes as I read it because I am going through something very similar to what the poem describes except the one I love lives in another state far from me. Great Poem!
Britney

Hey whats up?I would just like to say that your poem really touched me and I think that you should keep writting cuz you are an awesome writer.
Sandra

i liked everytinh about this poem. it was like u knew how i felt. i gave this poem to my crush
Allia

I think its good b/c it reminds a lot of how i luv this guy named donnie but sometimes i wonder if he luvs me back i wish i knew but i dont the poem is different it lets me know that ill find out sooner or later
maria

Hey wuz up gurl damn this poem is good cause i fell the same way for my baby boy chuito!
Jade

your poem is sooo good! I went thro the same thing with my BF.
Mariya

I love your poem, it's very beautiful. Keep it up girl.
Destiny

Thay was a really good peom you wrote i fell the same way about this guy name Matt keep up the good work
MoRgAn

Wow this poem describes exactly wot one of ma guy mates went thru! he woz stil in love wit ma bessie mate but e went out wiv dis otha gurl and i saw how much it hurt her wen she found out, great poem!
Gabriella

i think you have talent. reading your poem touched me. it also made me think of my boyfriend.
S

This was such a good poem! I could relate sooo well to it! i showed it 2 some of my friends and they thought i wrote it because it was so much like my situation! Awesome job though!
Olivia

That poem moved me. i have the same feelins' for a guy such as that. Its like u read my dreams. overall, awesome poem!
Tiffany

Girl! This poem is exactly what I what I am going through with my boy- friend now
NeNa

OMG! this poem describes what im going thru right now. i *LIKE* it alot =D! *keep up the good work* :)
jackie

it reminds me of how much i love my boy friend.
Nicole

OMG I love this poem! My boyfriends ex girl friend moved back to town last night and he is with her right now and she had told him not even 2 weeks ago when she was visiting how she loved him. It really touches me. Thank You
cassi

This poem is the one, the one poem i have been looking for. The same thing happened with a guy that was my friend, I felt the same way I've been looking for a poem to hang in my room so I willalways remember and I have found it. Its perfect!
Sunny

THIS POEM IS SO AWESOME! ITS LIKE YOU TOOK MY FEELINGS AND MADE A POEM OUT OF THEM! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
Sharea

This poem is the best I read so far, it resembels a lot to my present situation, so I feel myself identified with it.
Steph

This is a beautiful poem. You have a real talent for writing. This is almost exactly what i'm going through with a guy right now.
Nettey

I really liked this poem, I know what she was going through because my best friend got with my boyfriend and it felt horrible. But now I'm happy now that I got over it!
brian

this was a good poem becasue you choose to use the word "like" instead of "love" which is a word a lot of us say too easily
destinee

I REALLY LIKE THIS POEMS.YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE LIKE THIS ONE.THIS POEMS IS GREAT FOR THE GUY I REALLY LIKE.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Manda

I soooo..know how u feel.this poem relates to what i WAS going thru.and what i still have feelings for..reading this poem really does make me believe in all the good turn outs though !
jessica

i really like the poem. it is exaclty how i feel about a guy i like.
NINA

THIS POEM IS THE BEST POEM I'VE EVER SEEN. THANX SLEEPING BEAUTY.
natasha

i love it it is almost like my live that i live and i can't stop thinking about him. ur poem is very cute i loved it....
April

this poem is so great!it's exactly how i feel. i like loved this guy who was older then me and taller then me! then my friends told me about all the girls he hit on.
Liz

This poem totally relates to exactly what I'm going through right now. This poem really does mean a lot to me. I hope everything turns out alright for you.
perty

Im not a teenager.but your words touched me.for i think all ages have shared the anguish your words desribe.thank you. Many people still cannot understand the depth of feelings felt here on the net..But I do!
LISSETTE

I LOVE THIS POEM IT SAYS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS GUY AND HOW HE IS I LOVE IT
tosha

it was so sweet and cute at first, i loved the start!! but then you got to things we've all experienced! if this poem is true i'm sorry we've all had what we thought too be the perfict guy!!
lindsay

this poem is soo good! its so true and its just like whats happening to me now..i rate this a 10+++++++ :)
boarderchic

really sweet and it reminds me of my five month relationship my boyfriend
Lovette

This is a very good peom, it truely decribes the situation I am in. As a peot and a teenager, I can understand where you are coming from. Your poetry is appreciated, write more, we love to read your peoms. Thanks for sharing them.
Amber

I love that Poem so much cause it reminds me of this guy that is so i can't even bring the words to tell u but the poem is so true for me and what u said is true for me too!
Missy

This was a really good poem.I enjoyed writing it and thanx!

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