Well sometimes friends extremely impact our lives. That's when I decided that my two closest girl "friends" were two angels that God had sent me to love and take care of. This poem was written not by the mind but by the heart to these very two special angels, Annie and Rosie.

This poem originally was published in Friendship Poems - Teen Poems about Friendship

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My Angels
by Francisco Zenteno
There are two angels whom I know,
Both so glorious they seem to glow.
When they smile you don't need the sun,
And that's not all, these girls are fun!
One is sweet and thinks of nothing but others,
The second is strong and has many colors.
My love for them grows every day,
My closest friends forever I pray.
I miss my angels when we are apart,
They fill an emptiness that is in my heart.
Annie I'll miss you when you are away,
You'll always be my angel tomorrow and today.
Rossie, you are perfect, perfect as can be,
My love for you both won't fade,
This you'll always and forever see.
© 1999 Francisco Zenteno Please respect the rights of the author and Passions in Poetry. If you would like to use this poem on your own web page, please contact the Author. Thank you.
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74 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
  • helen
    it matches three people and not only two as usual. i liked it very much as i have 2 best friends and i want to be equal for both of them. thanks for a poem like that.
  • Ashleigh
    this poem is a great poem because it reminds me of my two friends
  • a
    i just moved half way across the country, and i miss my friends a lot and i think about them every day. they are just like the girls in the story, and i love them so much. this is a great poem!
  • Nina
    "wow" nice poem.
  • sheena
    I REALY LIKE YUOR POEMS I THINK THAT THEY ARESO SWEET
  • Elisabeth
    it was so good and i loved it as well.
  • Jessica
    It really does comes from the heart. Friendship that comes from the heart is always beautiful. Keep it up.
  • Jodie
    this poem really touched my heart. and i feel the same way about my two best friends. i would really miss them wherever they are
  • shawna
    I LOVE YOUR POEM! ITS ONE OF THE BEST THAT I'VE SEEN
  • BAINCA
    THIS POEM TOUCHED MY HEART IT MADE ME THINK OF MY TWO FRIENDS LIZETTE MY BEAUTIFUL BEST FRIEND AND EDEL MY ANGEL
  • tintin
    i love this poem. n-touch me!
  • emily
    it was one of the gratest poems i ever read!
  • Sarah
    This poem is awesome! I love it! You should send it to all of your bestest buddies because they need to read this poem. It is one of the best friendship poems I've ever read!
  • Megan
    This poem was amazing! I sent it to both my frineds and they loved it! It relates to me very much! We went to different high schools and we hardly see each other but we always know that the others are there for us!
  • jessica-lauren
    your poem was great!
  • maria
    its a great poem,that it it makes everbody say awwwwwwwwwwwwww
  • Rachel
    I think this poem is great because i have 2 best friends that i care for alot.
  • surbhi
    this piece is really nice
  • Cam
    pretty good job, man.
  • cj
    i love tht poem so much mi bestie emailed it 2 me and it touched mi heart
  • Amanda
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  • kate
    this poem reminds me of my two frinds from school. brit-brat and robin. they are the best of friends that anyone could ever have and know matter what i will always love them. brit robin if you both read this please remember that know matter what i'm here for life and that you can always come to me when you need a hand to hold. I'de do anything for you both, you guys are my best friends and will always be. I hope you both know just how much you both really mean to me. I love you guys and i always will i promise. Thanks for always being there and caring so much. kate
  • Ashley
    I really enjoyed this poem. The two girls in this poem reminded me of two of my friends that i would hate to be without. This poem really touches to the heart. Keep up the good work!
  • natasha
    it touched me and was a very moving poem its great
  • Rainey
    I loved the poem. That is so my two best friends (you can have two you know) Kaydee and Ashley! If you guys read this. I love you! Thanks for the wonderful poem. You are very talented. Great job. Don't quit school. Go to college. Get a nice job. Get married. And on your honeymoon. just amagine your mom at the end of the bed. Good luck in the future!
  • Alli
    I LOVED this poem. its great it reminded me of my bestest friends katie and hopie. i love them more than nething, its crazy this poem fits the three of us so well! great job!
  • Roseanne
    I liked it, it conected to me and my two friends yajaira and erivaliz
  • Maria
    This one hit because recently I lost my neice and a few years back a very dear friend. I hope that they have become angls and I still hold them close this poem almost made me cry I hope someonelse can find the same in it as I have.
  • Lucy
    This poem really made me smile. It made me think of my 2 best and closest friends Sophie and Emily. They are my angels. I would love to hear more of your poems if they are as touching as this!Thank you, you have made me smile inside and out!
  • ceebo
    i love this poem in particular because in my life i have 2 very special friends. both r exactly what the author of the poem expressed. my 2 best friends are everything 2 me. and just 2 find a poem that miraclously fits their description n how i feel 4 them is just soooooo amazing.
  • Samantha
    Awesome Job! Your poem touched my heart and many others that I know. Keep up the good work, your a true poet who writes straight from the heart, you can tell.
  • Sam
    I have two BEST FRIENDS and I love them dearly. I actually have two best friends exactly like that and i think you should keep writing you have skill.
  • Renae
    this poem is pretty good!
  • carlee
    I really love the poem "My Angels". It is sweet and the truth of what one felt!
  • einna
    ShockS! a very good poem. i can relate to it because ny angels and i are apart. :( and i really miss them a lot.
  • tiffany
    this is a great poem i really liked it alot after reading this poem i sent it to my dearset and closest best friend jackie i rate this poem a 10
  • Nat
    You are truly a remarkable poet. The poem " My Angels" reminds me of my angels and best friends, Ally and Carol. I really enjoyed this poem, it touched my heart. Thanks
  • Sissy
    I loved your poem, it perfectly describes me and my other two best friends.
  • Shell
    I think that this poem is well written and I like it alot
  • Jess
    You have a true gift with words, never ever quit writing and allow your heart to soar
  • Mandy
    Wow! this poem is great with a switch of the two names at the bottome the way i feel about my friends could not have been spoken better!
  • jodie
    hey your poem is really great . i love it !weldone and keep up the good work
  • Missy
    Its very good poem~It reminds me of my two friends.
  • lori
    I your poem, it made me think about my best friends; stacey and amanda. they were reciently in an accident and this poem shows me how much i really feel about them
  • Brey
    I think "My Angels" is a wonderful poem. When i first laid eyes on it i began to cry. It reminds me of my friendship that i have had for 8 almost 9 years. This peom really touch me i wish the best for it.
  • Liv
    This poem rocked.
  • misty
    GREAT POEM I HOPE YOU STAY FRIENDS FOREVER AND ALWAYS. MY BEST FRIEND TOSHA IS YHE BEST THING THAT HAS EVER HAPPENED TO ME SO I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL.
  • M-LO
    AWSOME POEM. I CAN RELATE TO THAT SO MUCH. IT REMINDS ME OF MY BEST FRIEND THAT PASSED AWAY IN A CAR ACCIDENT.
  • Betty
    I loved this poem it reminded me of my 2 friends that died and I loved this poem so much
  • Mntha
    Amazing. This poem just touchedmy heart and seemed to describe exactly wat i feel about my freinds, it is jus amazing. Congratulations on your ability, keep up the wonderful work.
  • Amy
    I really can relate to this poem.It is how I feel bout my friends Simone and Allison!
  • KrissyB
    i love ya poem. keep up the good work
  • Metese
    HI WOW! That poem is well written and realates to me and my 2 best friends! THey are my angels! I was lookin for a poem I could send to my 2 best friends and when I read this one i knew it was it. Very well written!
  • xDuDe
    hey Francisco , I think that this poem is wicked, it relates to things that have happened to me in the passed...and reminds me...of my god sister that killed her self. I think this poem is excellent.
  • mac
    This is beautiful. I know exactly what you mean.
  • Kamila
    Wonderful!I love it!Many friends are angels for me!
  • Debs
    beautiful!
  • Steph
    I reallie like that poem. It also represents me. Because i also have two friends i cherish.
  • j.
    this was a very moving poem i have 2 best friends and this is what i have been trying to say to them but didn't know how
  • Zach
    I cried. My friends cried. We ALL cried!
  • Kristina
    This Poem really brought out my appreciation for angels
  • Rebecca
    Would be nice if it applied to anyone, but can be easily modified. Wonderful thought.
  • camy
    IT WAS GREAT i liked it
  • Jessica
    This poem is sweet and it reminds me of how I feel about my friends and how I will always love them like sisters.
  • Jessica
    it was very very very good! :)
  • Amanda
    I really loved this poem!! It was so good, i'm using it in my poetry notebook for english class. This poem really made me think of 2 of my friends
  • matthew
    i love this poem so much i sent it to one of my friends
  • Annoymous
    God, this poem was so touching. when i read it i felt like the poet knew exactly how i felt about my best friend, julie. Fransisco Zenteno keep on writing cause you've got talent!
  • Natrina
    It was very good! I like poems that rhyme and although i only have ONE best friend I know exactly how she feels!
  • ez
    your cool keep it up
  • kristy
    hey, i really liked your poem. i really like to read poems and shered it with my friends. thanks
  • Rebecca
    This poem was great and i bet the friends this poem was for really loved it and i would love it if one of my friends wrote this to me but me and my friends are not that poetic so we just get poems out of books and off the net and give to each other. But i really enjoyed reading this poem and i belive the writter should keep on writting because she/he are really good writters. seeya
  • kip
    well i lied it because i could really relate to what they where saying!
  • Tresa
    this is a very sad, yet, wonderful poem. it really means friendship.
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