#33 Me?
This poem is when you feel like you don't like who you are or even if you don't know who exactly you are. It also ties in with how you don't think who you are will get you that special one.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Teenage Love Poems
Me?
I look in the mirror and I see, A person who never stops crying A person that is not me A person that hurts A person in pain A person who lost it A person who is insane A person that worries All day and all night A person who is scared A person in fright A person I don't like A person I don't want to be A person who knows - You will never love me. |
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1999
Megan H.
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96 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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Demitriatell me about it girl i know how you feel. I hate that feeling i hope your are better know! Great poem i can really relate to it. :)
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LisaI love this poem. YOu should write mnore I can really feel the words.
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HayleI love the poem. It means alot to me since I fell for a older guy and we can't be together due to he's taken plus I don't know his feelings. But what he has done to make me feel great means everything since I can trust him.
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SianneeThis poem is amazin i wish i cld b gd at rytin poems! well dn its amazin! X
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Melaniethis is a really good poem but i hope its just a poem and ur not really depress or anything well anyways lol i do like this good job
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CheyenneWow! That is way true! Thats pretty much what everyone wants to tell someone but never can because they think that they won't understand. Its really good!
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lynnit touched me b/c it made me think of when my boyfriend broke up with me and the way i felt about it. and i think this one of the best poems i have read so far!
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BrittneyThis is a powerful poem and I understand what you mean because I feel the same way. I read the frist line and knew that I was going to relate so well with this. Great Poem I must say!
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TabithaI really liked this poem. i've had this happen so many times. its a shame that life has to be so hard. i sent this to the guy i like and he was totally confused by it. guys are dumb.
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judyi frickin love this poem it says wat needs to be said
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BrandyI liked it alot
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ClarissiaI JUST READ YOUR POEM AND I REALLY DO LIKE IT. I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL BECAUSE THERE ARE TIMES WHEN I WONDER WHY MY BOYFRIEND LOVES ME.
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ShaylynI loved it so much. I feel like it all the time. As I write this I feel like it. Im glad im not the only one that feels like this. Well I say you kep on writin poems.
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KirstinThis was a great poem, I feel that way when my boyfriend start to act stupid
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elizabethwow! its such a great poem dat i even felt ur pain.
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kindalini feel the same way
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skyeit was really touching i mean, its how alot of people feel these days. you are a really good poet
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Madiei Love this poem 100%. proMise.
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JENNIFERWHEN I READ THIS POEM I COULD ALMOST FEEL HER PAIN. I WAS IN A RELATIONSHIP WHERE THE LOVE WASNT RETURNED AND IT TAKES ALOT TO FINALLY ACCEPT IT AND MOVE ON WITH YOUR LIFE
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MeganI really relate to this poem b/c this is how i feel every day b/c i lost someone i really loved n cared about
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AshleyThis poem touched me in a way that word can't discribe. I was once that person, And I will never be that again. Thank you for putting my fellings into words.
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TahiraShort,Simple,& Sweet!I loved it!It took the words right out my mouth!
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karinaI loved this poem because it describes what i feel. its a great poem to express what girls who want to be loved feel
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Delisa Adunii am really touched by this poem it just explains how i feel at times but i have learnt that if u be proud of who u are you begin to shine and trust me ull have boys falling at you feet but first u must learn to love yourself trust me it works ;)
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ImaHey this poem is great. I remember when i use to look in the mirror and cry bout break ups with my boyfriends. Great job keep up da good work!
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MichelleThis poem reminds me of me. Its true what it says. Its great
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TabithaI like this poem it is a good one it resemblez me in a way that people disrespect me in a way that I am just a person for a one night stand I can't handle that stuff I want people to kno that I ain't no pass around!
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JazminI know wat u r going through. I going through the same thing. U r not alone.
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DreamerOMG! that was such a good poem i realy liked it it realy touched me thats exactly how i feel right now with a guy that just broke my heart. keep it up girl!
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LisaI feel like this sometimes. It is a perfect poem
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christiethis poem was excellent and i totally understand were your comin from, i've loved this guy for 10 years and he's never gonna love me that way and i litterally busted out in tears when i read this i was really good
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AngelThis poem describes me to the fullest and everything I'm filling now since I'm in my teenage years.
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Josiei liked this poem because i can really realate to it and is the same thing i feel
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evewow i really liked your peom. it is how i feel cuz i want to change who i am i just dont know how,keep writing more peoms your great at it.
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katelini loved that poem. that is agsactly how i feel. just no one ever put it that way.
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alexanderwow really good. i love it. it's just so. true. i've felt like that lots of times.
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shanicei love this poem it is exactly how I feel right now at this time in my life I would really love to read some more of your poems
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emilythis poem reminds me of me. i dont love myself i dont even like myself but i only love him.
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ashleyI really liked it!
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KaylaOh I just LOVE this poem! I started to cry when I finnished! KEEP IT UP!
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Jacklynthis poem reminds me of myself and my best friend Freda we both think like that and it sounds like something she would write
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DominiqueI loved this poem I truly understand, many people feel like this and cant exsplain and I think you captered the feelings in you words exactly it was great 100%
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vivianwow i feel that way most of the time. theres someone i really like who will neve love me. i totlally understand your poem. its really sad and cool at the same time.
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ShanikaThis poem was tight so girl keep doing your thing and keep shaking them haters off. Yourgot real talent.
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thereseThis is a very sad poem, that sadly i could relate to. My advise to the author is to find your inner strength. I have found that in the end all you have is you, don't put yourself down because enough people will do that for you. KEPP UR HEAD UP!
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MindyGreat Poem Exactly How i feel
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Heatherthat was a relly good poem
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Laurapoetically, this is a very nice poem, however, you should never put yourself down like that. I used to do it all of the time and than i realized that i am who i am . and i have to live with that until i die.
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AliciaHey the poem was awesome and it reminded me of ME! Keep the good work up.
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AllyI loved this poem! it completly relates to me im so confused about everything but whats worst is that i used to have a great life but i made it horrible i hate who ive become! i put your poem in my locker i loved it!
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vikithis poem just simply describes me! i don`t know how you do i t but i thought i might just tell you ,,,that you r a great poet
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HollyI like it alot. it was awesome. !
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KayThis poem is what I feel like everyday. Your a great poet keep writting !
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LizzieOh wow. This poem almost made me cry. I can really relate to that poem. I thought that once before, but that was until I found Josh. He is my true love.
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nicolethat's a very nice poem and that's how i really feel sometimes so i was like wow because i really do look in the mirror and say those things
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Aimiei love your peom is im so good and you did a good job ):
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EvyI love this poem, it sounds like you wrote it for my life, depressed, pregnant, and thinking my first love would be in love with me and be there for me, but I just have myself and my baby now.
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dorothythis poem is up front and honest this is a very good poem
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Yashicayes that is what i feel because i need my ex back and i have this hurrible man.
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chelseaThis poem is really good! I liked it a lot and im sure a lot of teenagers can relate to this. You did a great job! Keep up the good work!
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Nizawow. this poem os really amazing It's the best I've read. I feel exactly the same and I know that first I gotta love myself but I know that Kristian is never gonna love me.
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Kimi loved this poem. it sounds just like me
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DominI love your poem so much you have alot of talent that anybody can rarely find in this generation
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BethI really loved your poem and can totally relate to it. Keep writing and keep up the good work!
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JessiI really lovd your poem it touched me in a way i cant explain. When i read it I started to cry. Thats the way I feel deep down in side when I see my self. If you write anymore poems let me know i woldlove to read them. Youra great poet with massive potential.
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Daisyi like ur poem cuz it's exactly how i am. and also. i hate having to wear that happy mask around people. is it ok if i use ur poem?
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Mei loved this poem i can totaly relate to it i thnk that you shoud keep writting poems you terrific at it
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KAYLATHAT POEM WAS REALLY GREAT!IT EXPRESSES JUST HOW I FEEL BOUT MY X!
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SexyThis poem really touched me,when I finished reading it I was like 'wow', that is exactly how I feel. Keep you head up and keep writing those heartfelt, deep poems.
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BradWhoohh.
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angelicaI feel like that alot od times. That was a great poem!
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anniethat peom takes every enmotion that i have ever thought and puts it into words when my guy broke my heart
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KrisiThis is a realy good poem, something I can surely relate to. I showed my mom this poem to help her to understand why I am bulimic
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RYANHIS POEM IS TITE
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LindseyThis poem really touched me, because how often I can relate. You did a wonderful job expressing feelings that even I couldn't put into words. keep up the good work
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DanielleI love your poem. It expresses the way I feel 100%. Your a great poet keep up the great work.
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NiccoleI Really liked the poem.. It was great..It is the kind of poem that u read and it makes ur heart feel all weird in side..
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DanI ocmpletly relate to this poem ...It makes me feel better to know thats there are people in the world who are going through the same situations as me
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AlishaREALLY GOOD ! I feel the same way..:*(
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KAROLI THINK THAT THE POEM WAS GREAT I THINK THAT PEOPLE SHOULD WRITE MORE POEMS LIKE THIS.
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MajaOmg i love this poem i hope that my crush will read this poem and see excactlly how i feel about him..well great job! and great poem very sad but true:'(
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jennyHey this poem describes me so much i would really like to get in touch with you but probably wont well nice poem!
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jerif u liked the poem u wrote.then it is a start. because poetry comes from the heart. therefore u must like u're heart. and if u like u're heart than the image in the mirror is only skin deep.
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MaryI thought the poem was good a little depressing but it in my view was grat you need to keep writing
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Kerri-AnnThis is a very good poem, because it is the way that I feel about myself
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DanniThe poem is very good, but also sad.
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D.B.I completely understand this poem because I understand what it feels like to think that you may never be good enough to find that special person. I think there are many people who feel the same way but don't know how to say it. This poem is the way!
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sarahthis is a really cool poem, i like it alot.
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rachelportrays the way i have been feeling. a great poem.
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BebeIt is very good!!!
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HeatherI thought this poem was really good it is a poem that i can relate to and it definatly needs recognition.
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BrittanyThis is exactly how I feel about myself. This poem is so good!!
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mandyI liked your poem very much. I meyself write poems very often and I think yours is really good.
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PHYLISI REALLY LIKED WHAT U HAD TO SAY.
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Joymegan, your poem is really good. its very expressive.
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Shandelthat is a pretty poem i liked it well hey i just wanted to tell you that i liked ur poem
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