#99 Quiet Emotions
I once had a friend, that no matter how hard we tried we always ended up in disagreements. This poem was written to let him know that no matter our arguments, our friendship would always be there.
This poem originally was published in Friendship Poems - Poems about Lost Friends
Quiet Emotions
I always wanted more from you than you were willing to give; So now we've gone our separate ways each with different lives to live. The bond will always be there the friendship always intact; But the time for us has come and gone and the pages of time, you can't turn back. I will always be a friend to you and wonder how you are; The smiles and laughter I will remember and our fights have become painless scars. Sometimes on those busy days when you've a thousand things to do; Please let me glide slowly through your mind and spend some time with you. In that quiet moment when you're surprised to find me there; Just remember even with the distance between us I am still someone who cares. |
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1999
Judy Burnette
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197 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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CaitlinVery beautiful. Just what I am feeling.
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KarinaHey Judy I had a great friend walk away from my life as well, and this poem says exactly wat I feel. So in away you've helped find the perfect words to express how I feel thank you and may god bless you.
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ramyathis poem is Very touchy, very emotional. i'll let my friend know what i feel about him, what i expected out of him and what he had done to me. the expectations, the friendship, the love, that i dint get from him. but yet he had left a scar on my heart. that remembers of him evey sec in my life He atleast hated me, i was a part in his life i like you very much. my friendship is true.
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JaneisI was just randomly looking at your poem then I came a cross this peom of ead it through several times and then it hit me and totally sound like me and my old bestfriends we both went our seperate ways and made new best friends and now there is still a bond between us. but deep down she will always be my bestfriend no matter what happens to us and even if i have new bestfriend x x x Janeis
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M.Tender, touching and transperent words. What can I say to describe words that I looked for to say to my friend and found in this poem. So Thanks and good luck
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cynthiahey. i love your poem. i can relate to this especially now. i put this on my blog, but I do include your name. i write poems too and i don't want anybody telling others they were the ones who wrote my poem. i hope it's alright with you. keep writing good poems. goodluck.
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AndrewI know what she mean I love a girl but i cant be so now she has a boyfreind and it is killing me but i will allway be her friend .
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christinai really loved this poem i can relate to it keep up the good work!:~)
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Morganejust beautiful words written by a beautiful person no doubt about that. Morgane
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TamishaI like this poem alot it makes me think of alot of things that happened in the pass this is the best poem i've ever read.
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RainaI loved ur poem. I too am a poet. I also have lost a good friend. Well. Not so true. Like u said i needed more than u gave. '
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ShelbyThis reminds me of my ex bestfriend he was like a brother to me, we did everything together. then one day he just thought that i did something wrong but he just doesnt understand that i didnt do anything to him but i guess that alright. but this is really good. I give u props on this its very good!
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MaryI have had a friend for 34 years. I always try to be there for her. She lost her husband a few months ago,my husband and I helped her do everthing and then we started to hear the hurtful things she is saying behind our backs. I just wish she would own up to what she has said ,and admit that she was wrong. so I am going to e mail her this poem because I think it says how I feel down deep. Mary
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Eddiei want to thank you for your poem,as it says exactly what i need to say to a friend i hurt and have now lost,i hope it has the same effect on her as it did me,xxx
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amberI thought that was a kewl poem I can relate. Keep writing more; )
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jacquiomg you poem was so beautiful it made me cry. so ture to me
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Debbievery well written, concise - LOVED IT
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NatashaLove It! Almost made me cry.
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aminafantastic poem i ever read in ma life . it herat touching n i feel all the emotions whish i felt when ma frnd leave me. i luv it. really gud poem
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GHETTO_QUEENthis is a great poam, it Expresses what most people like my self and many other people as teens, adults and children might be feeling. leaving friends is not a easy choice to make but sometimes it’s the only way out
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LeslieA very nice poem. i can relate too much. thanks for this doem.
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mikeThis touched me, it fits perfectly. Thank you.
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MargaretVery moving just the way I feel and know can express
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ALEIFIYAhey i gess i noe wad u must have been going tru . it s tuff wen ur fren doesnt care n all. da poem just made me go crazy. it was splendid.
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WendyI love this poem. I recently lost a friend and want to say to him how I feel but I couldn't quite get the words just right. this says it all for me! Thank You
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kaylai been there done that
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AmberIt reminds me of my friendship with this guy. and I thought it was special, but he doesn't seem to notice how I feel. I like this poem. maybe I'll email it to him.
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VincentI like the opening line about wanting more the one is willing to give nice poam
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Megthis is a great poem i have the same situation with one of my friends. i love the way you were able to rhyme so well
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samanthai think this peom was one of the best peoms i have ever heard.
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AricelisI really liked this poem. I could really relate to it, being that I am in that position right now, and I feel the same way.
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heatherLOVE IT!
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ToreyI loved the poem because it describes how I am feeling right now. It is good keep up the great work.
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FayeWOW! This poem mens more than a million words I LOVE IT!
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alanai live in a harsh city where people fight all the time in terrible ways. And this poem just made me think of my school and the city i live in. Its a great poem
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RuthExcellent. I felt the pain of the loss. I know that pain too well. The expression of the words spoke to my heart.
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casseythis poem is great i think everyone has had at least one friendshhip that can be reminced by the words of this poem
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CherryI read this poem today and, it felt as though the words of it were my very own. One thing we must remember is that pain is inevitable but, suffering is optional. This poem reminds us. Excellent Job.
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MelysaThis poem is excellent, it's one that i can definitely relate to. *five thumbs up*
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niklasthis is a great poem it remindes me of a good friend i had to leave
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LauraThis poem touched me when I was still in love with an ex boyfriend. I was moving away and could leve with leting him know how I feel. The words in this poem explained them perfectly
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AndreaI really liked this poem. It says so much of what I am going through with my brother! We were like best friends and now he doesn't talk to me anymore. I am going to send this to him! Thank you!
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rafiqahOh my gOd!i lOve this pOem very much because this pOem tells exactly hOw I feel. keep up the gOOd wOrk Judy!
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stephaniei love your poem i justlost someone that i cared about ,he killed his self and this poem kinda relates to me and him , i hope that you keep you head up you have alot going for you, you are talented god bless.
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vanessawow amazing
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Dr. AnnHi Judy, Your poem is really touched me and matched with my situation. I tried to find a poem that about my feeling . coz me and a friend got ruin up our friendship for unreasoning explaination. THere is so much things that we can't get a chance to explain. We both don't mean to be friend I guess. but I wish to let her know how much her friendship mean to me. And She is totally all WRONG about me. but I won't claim or hate her. Coz a friend need to learn how to forgive. Frienship is hard to find and hard to keep. so I guess I just "Thank" for your words putting all my feeling into pieces. a wonderful poem. Thx for the hard work. your words mean to me, so others?? Thx Dr. Ann
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damienVERY NICE.
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GailYour poem seemed to express everything i was trying to say. Thank you x
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ShonaI wish I could write something like this poem. I've related to it in so many ways. thank you :)
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zoeThis poem touched me deeply it made me realise that has happened to me and my friend, we have drifted further apart over the last few months, and i would like her to know that still if she ever needs me i will be there for her.
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zayenwhen i read this, it touched me. what i went through is exactly like what is written, i hope she knows that i'm still here.
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LaurenI loved this poem so much it made me realize that I my self treat my bestfriend like that, but because I love and care about her so much I will because I don't ever want to lose her becsuse of something like that. AWESOME poem. hands down
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CherylI think that this is a very beautiful poem, not just because I can relate to it but because Once i finish reading it, I relaized that pain is a part of life that we all must feel. And I encourage You to keep your head up and to NEVER give up! -Cheryl-
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KiraThat was just amazing. It really was awesome. Great work you did there. -Kira
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zachyea this one hits hard had a friend wanted her! as more tried to make her give more than she wanted to now she is only a memory that is forever stuck in my head i will always care and be there for her even if now she hates me cause she means that much ???????
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BrittanyI love this poem so much and I think it's very well written. It covers everything that alot of people feel so perfectly and so smooth.
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shiviThis is really a wonderful poem. This poem shows the feelings of a person who is unable to ask what she always wants to.
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MAUREENTHIS POEM REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART. I TOO HAD A WONDERFUL FRIEND WHO I FEEL BETRAYED ME BY TALKING BEHIND MY BACK TO MY COUSIN. SHE TRIED MANY TIMES TO CALL ME BUT I DID NOT TAKE THE CALLS. SHE NO LONGER CALLS BUT I THINK OF HER NOW AND THEN AND HEAR FROM RELATIVES HOW SHE IS DOING. I MISS HER ALOT. BUT LIKE THEY SAY YOU CAN NEVER GO BACK TO THE WAY IT WAS.
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Zai would give u 10. this poem is so touching. i cried when i read it. it makes me feel the same way i do about a lost brother, who decide to go for drugs instead of family 'and our fights have become painless scars'. this is exaclty how i feel wow! good job
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nanditasome people cant put feelings into word but you've done those perfectly . a realy cute poem
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christinThis poems was really good. I loved it. Your a good writer.
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CARLETTERThis poem really touched me. I lost my best friend,high school sweetheart,lover of 11 years due to change of heart. This explains exactly how I feel about him.
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Corinai loved this poem. its so true and it means something to me because this is how i feel about some people in my life. thanks!
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ramaamazing and touching poem. excellent
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shaneli think that, that poem is cute and that and i can relate to it. go head boo do your thang i give 95%
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ijazi like this poem ver much cuz this poem touches my heart.
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Drago H.The words used in the poem were definately used well and I was deeply touched by the way the writer spoke. Wow.
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RaeThe poem is so touching. I just had a major crisis with my friend, Sharon. It is just a small matter but our friendship just kept quiet. I do not know is there an ending or still maintain. This poem is suitable for me. Good poem !
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maryamThis poem is just awesome
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joshuaur so good cuz i really felt emotional from this. thank u.
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FarahThis poem is great! I really can relate to you. and this beautiful poem!
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yvettethis poem was real good it's one of the best ones that i have read in this web site. the words are so true and whoever wrote this should be real proud. i wish i had written this poem
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maryTHIS POEM SAY'S EVERYTHING I WANTED TO SAY BUT DIDN'T KNOW HOW. THANK YOU
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saraoh my gosh. this peom so reminds me of my best friend. she still is my best friend,but she always busy with dancing and doesnt understand that i need to spend some time with her. i hate how i wait for her everysay to come home so that we can hangout together. but she ends up coming home late so its way to late. i kinda wanna tell her i dont wanna be best friends anymore. its just to hard fer me to deal with. i cant do it anymore. i've told her once before but it just hasnt gotten to her yet. i love your poem Judy and keep on writing please!
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LenaThis poem made me think about my relationship with my best friend. As of right now I feel like I dont know her anymore, but this poem also gave me understanding on how other people have the same feelings. Dont get me wrong I still love her and forever will. It makes me not feel alone anymore. AND IT FEELS GOOOD!
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KiaraOne of the best poems i've read, hands down.
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sonnyTHis poesm is very well written. I loved it!I write poetry too,i hope that one day i can write as good as this poet. It shows that she puts her heart to her work,very well done!
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Katrinai love this poem it means alot to me to know there is someone out there who feels the same way i do
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AshleyI love this poem. I think my friend Roger and I are drifting apart. When I send him emails, his sister, also my friend, tells me that he calls me names. I hate it because I really care about him and I just wish he would too. This poem tells exactly how I feel.
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graceso good.
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KThis poem is so touching and it's significant of the way I feel now. My friend and I had a strong friendship and when it ended, I felt as though I lost a brother that was very close to me. I hope he can forgive me and be friends again. Someday
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TeresaThe poem touched my heart and stung my soul. It was a very telling emotion. Thank you for sharing that insight.
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andreaThis was the best poem it totaly understood what i was thinking its cool
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LindsayI vote for this poem because it really touched me, my family is going through a situation like this and this poem explains it all.
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JosieSuch a beautiful poem
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joelthere is a way that words count when everything else seems lost or devoid of meaning. these past days my life has been devoid of laughter after i lost a very beautiful friendship, i know it will take time for the pain to end, maybe it wont. this poem will help me tell them, that i did treasure everything and always will.
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MarisaSometimes a poem speaks your feelings for you, this one does that for me.
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mayraI loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it
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allyi thought this poem was amazing. i am feelin the same way right about now. and i now realize that im not the only one which is kinda comforting.
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HildaYour poem is beautiful and it really hit the spot! Thank you
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AshleyWow, this poem is touching and it feels like you reached inside me and pulled all my feelings out and put them into this poem. It relates just much to an experience I just went through. Sometimes when friendships end although you dont necessarily want them back you just want to let the other person know you still care, that is what this poem does. Amazing job!
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dimpleim touched by the innocense and the truth. sometimes it feels as if it has happened with us also,lost in this whole world,gone are those days of loud talks & left with some unspoken thoughts. when our friend has just gone away from our life. at that time when we had never expected. i really like this poem
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erinIt really touched me because this poem is so true to me and my junior high best friend!
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MaeganThis poem really touched me because 3 years ago i lost my best friend of 12 years. she left me to go be "popular". i was never popular but i always thought she'd be by my side. i was wrong. i cry a lot just thinking about her. she is my neighbor, i see her everyday but we dont speak. she judges me like we've never met, now i realize the enemies we have become. we have put walls up between eachother and hopefully ill talk to her soon and the walls will come down.
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AngelThis touched me as it is so very true in life. Some friendships fade away and we sit there wondering why and do hope that we will not be a forgotten blip in the memories of someone we once held so close and dear to our hearts.
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Marie Eugeniei can relate to the poem. i was touched. i think i'll cry. it's a very good poem.
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BethI just wanted to say that I really really like this poem. Reading it brought me to tears, since I can connect so well with it. It is the closest thing to fitting the situation with one of my friends at the moment that I have found yet. It really describes how I feel. Thanks to Judy for a great poem!
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mickyi liked it
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KhristianaWow, I feel for you. I just lost my bestfriend, Andrew. I cry every night wondering how he could have ever left me. He promised that he wouldn't because I meant so much to him, And that I was the last person he would hurt. But now he has a girlfriend, and everything changed, he just can't see that I'm the only girl that could love him so.
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amberthis was a great poem, and it made me get very sad because my best friend jordan and me have grown apart because she replaced me for another girl. i loved this poem.
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HeatherJudy,i love yr poetry. thankyou. Last yr i had a wonderful unforgettable relationship with a married man. i too am a maried woman. we had the most wonderful happy summer of 2003. we are both 50. !. sadly our spouses found out. we are now trying to make the 30 yr marriages work. yet we met one day in town and we both know that what we shared was so wonderful and there is still that love between us. so you see yr poem 'Quiet Emotions'. was just for me. as is 'The Question of Belonging'. plus others,and i thank you. !. Keep up the good work Judy. !
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SarahThis poem understands me.
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PeterA truly wonderful poem from the heart. Your words mirrors my own feelings of a love lost. There is comfort in knowing that there are others out there that know what it feels like when a love bond is lost. Your words also give strength for myself and those who are struggling through the emotions. thank you.
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RosemaryThis poem made me cry cause i miss my friend so much it hurts really bad thinking of him, even so ur poem was great.
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amandaThis poem is really good! It really explained the way I feel about one of my friends!
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khusbuhey i loved the poem and it brought back some memories when me and my best friend parted over petty things. I'm glad we're friends again.
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BrandieAfter spending all day, I say this poem and knew it was the one I was looking for. I sent it to my old best friend and she called me, for the first time in a while and said that is what she wanted to tell me. Beautiful, really beautiful!
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Heathergreat poem. meaningful
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ShannonAll I can say is 'WOW'. This poem has touched me in ways that it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing it with us all.
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SophiThis poem made me realize how valuable friendships truly are. I have experienced a similar situation in my life. Although my friend and I will never be as close as we used to be, he will always hold a special place in my heart. I will continue to treasure th good times we had and hope he will do the same.
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Qilai love it so much,do you know that this poems was like made for my friandship. I was seperated from my best'est friend in UK coz i got to go back to Malaysia,my country.
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ashleyright as i write i am about to loose someone as a freind and it hurts his name is dale and we have been freinds for a while and not this well this peom expresses how i feel exactly and thanx i need to read something like !
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Sarahthis poem made me cry coz im fighting with my best friend and i miss her so much coz she has replaced me with another girl so it is very special to me
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TammyThis poem touched me in a special way. The first time I read it, I cried. Your an excellent poet. Keep those words from your heart flowing.
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bibitongI AM SENDING THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM TO MY FRIEND, FREDDIE
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MeganYour poem is from the heart and speaks the truth. Your not alone i have had a friend just like what your poem describes. I too write poetry and i felt your was really good! Keep it up!
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nikkiThis is a great poem. it really hit home. it is beautifully put together.
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JessicaThis poem is wonderful, it describes a lost friendship of mine so well. I really love it.
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KathyTHIS POEM SAID EXACTLY WANT I WANTED TO SAY THANK YOU SO MUCH. IT TOUCHED ME MORE THAN YOU WILL EVER KNOW. THANK YOU!
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shandai loved your poem it was great i think im going to send it to my friend kim who is starting not to hang out with me or be my bestfriend anymore shes changing and i am too and things justs are not what they were a few months ago when we always got to hang out
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GinaThe poem was great! It made me miss my best friend! Thank you!
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DeeDeeI WISH I COULD SEND THIS TO MY FRIEND BUT WERE NOT SPEAKING TO EACH OTHER . THIS IS A GREAT POEM.
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Annieamazing poem
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AlisonQuiet Emotions by Judy Burnette This really hit a chord with me. Well done on capturing something so accurately
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Katiereally good and had alot of emotions add i was really sad when i read it
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crystellthis is a very wonderful poem that i had ever read. really. I kinda endured this kind of. feeling before. It really hurts.
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MISSYi absolutley love your poem. it has inspired me so much and im going through this with a very close friend right now. you are a very talented poet. keep it up!
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DanielThis poem hit so close to home. I thought that maybe I had gotten up one night and wrote it myself and never knew about it. I just thank you for writting this and putting my feelings perfectly into words. Keep up the wonderful writing.
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LinaWoW. does this poem rox or wat?!?!it realli describes the situation my frenZ and i are in rite now. i sent this poem to my frens. hoping tt dey recieve the msg tt i'm trying to send dem. thanks a lot. this poem is realli great and it has made me feel so much betta.
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Just MeThis is a great poem. I came here today to check out the poems. it make me so sad because all the poems that i read reminds me of the special friend that i've lost a month ago just because of me over-reacted
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qudsiathis poem is lovely and beautiful.
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SarahWHEN I BEGAIN TO READ THIS POEM IT FELT AS IF THE AUTHER WAS READING MY MIND MY THOUGHTS WERE THE SAME. I'd SAY THAT JUDY HAS GREAT POTENTAIL TO BE A SPLEDED POET [PLEASE EXCUSE MY SPELLING]
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angeli loved this poem. i sent it to my sister in michigan. im in nc. i then wrote it down for my self to put in my scrape book. thank you.
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IsIThis was such a touching poem ! Its amazing how our friends can make us feel so sad. Sometimes our friends can determine our happiness in life.
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jyotiVery nice poem. The real quiet emotions for a friend.
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CharlYour poem was lovely it really reflected your feelings Well Done
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CindyI really enjoyed your poem. It touched me and made me think of a friend of mine that I had to leave behind when I moved away. I believe you could really become a great poet. "Those with wings fly to your dreams"
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AngelI think this poem is really really good. Best one on this site!
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sami liked this poem this is really good
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ObedDear Judy, I've read this beautiful poem many times over and over and I must say that it has touched me deeply everytime. Your wrighting it's pure beauty. Thank you"
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jeni think that this poem has a great sentimental value for me so i suppose i am biased. It reminds me of what i am going through in my life at the moment and makes me happy about it anyway. I think that this poem is the sweetest. Its depressing, in a nice, cute sort of way. God this poem!
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CarlyThank you so much for this poem. I recently recieved a poem from my ex-best friend and I found out that we really need out friendship back. I am giving this poem to her tomorrow to show my agreement in return. Thank you so much.
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Emmai like this poem because i relate to it. i had lost some friends from moving here in the u. s. so this is says something about what i feel.
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LanceThank you so much for sharing your poem, I found it so very touching, and it made me think of my best friend of 30 years,who recently passedaway, I wish I could fit the entire poem on his grave marker, to my best friend Bill
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raniWhen I read this i remembered my old friend. I had never wrote a letter but after reading this i'm sending her one. This a really great poem, I'll definetly tell my friends about this poem
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Meganthis poem means alot to me i just lost my best frend he was someone i could talk to about anything but i lied and so did he so how we can ever trust eachother again i do not know but i hope one day we can find our way back to eachother becaus it is hard to imagine my life with out him i love him i hope he NEVER forgets me
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ElizaThis poem is very nice. it makes me cry. There is a reason why. I had a friend called Annanefeli. She used to be my bestfriend and now I have lost her. We are just normal friend. I cried a lot that believing she is gone forever. she is not my best friend anymore. I don't have anybody to tell how I feel about loosing all my best friends. Eveytime I read a poem about loosing their best friend I cried. Anyway I love this poem and I hope the author is in good condition.
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Amberthis poem is incredible. i haven't been able to find the words to express my feelings for my best friend and our situation right now. we've been best friends since the 7th grade, and now he's becoming distant, and wants different things from friendships than I do. this has been killing me inside, and now with college coming up, this is so perfect. right on the money. i'm crying right now. keep writing, this is beautiful.
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NicleThis poem is so awesome. lately Ive been have alot of trouble with friends n such n this poem did it. it made me realize that no matter whether I let go of the friendship or not. I will never stop karin. THANKS!
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AnnieThis poem means so much to me. its exactly what i'm going threw. Its a touching poem and i like it alot
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CheriI love this poem! It was almost as if I had wrote it about one of my closest friends :)
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TinaI've just lost my best friend of 7 years a few days ago and I've been searching for a way to tell him how I feel about losing him. This beautiful poem says it all. Thank you so much.
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julesHey good poem! It reminded me of my old best friend, we were very colse until lies and secrets ripped us apart. keep writing these they're good
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MelI can put put myself in this situation. It's hard to tell your own dear friend you Love him,this makes it hard and painful at the same time to you. But at the time you might think what if the only thing I can get from him "Friendship" breaks if I tell him I love him.
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AndieI love the poem! Keep up!
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JimThis is one of my favorite poems. I recently had to say good bye to someone I loved very much for reasons I won't go into. This poem brought closure in a very gentle way. I admire your point of view very much.
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NicoleI loved this poem..but it made my cry. I read it over and over listening to Graduation by Vitamin C. My best friend and I are about to go to high school and she is moving. She never can visit though because her mom hates me.
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benthis poem is very good and sad alltogether. This poet is smart
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AravindThis is one poem I really like .It is so true and so close to my heart that it says everything I want to say and in a much better way.It made me cry thinking of all the friends I have who donot keep in touch. I am planning to send this to all those friends.
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KatieThis is exactally how i feel about my friends and i, they were both mad at me and i sent it to them, hopefully.. they accept my apology
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KatieI totally understand what this poem means. Even though I talked to this friend all the time she just died not to long ago and now I feel like there is a place in my heart that no one could fill.The last time I talked to her was two months before she died and I didn't even get to say good bye and I love her.
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BeccaThis is a great poem.I got in a huge fight with my old best friend a few months ago, and we have barely spoken since.every now and then in the halls we smile but never speak to each other..lately I've realized I do miss being around her.I miss alot of things about her..this is a great poem and it really touched me.
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kristini sent that to someone that it really fit with me and him so i want to thank you i was trying to find a way to tell him and finally did!
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fatimathis poem is very touching. it reminds me my friend who become my best of friends; however, things gone wrong and we need to be on our way. keep up writing a good poems.
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RaymondI liked this very much, it hit the right spot for my ex. we have a child together and be together for 5 year and alot of stuff happened with us and know its over but still want to be a freind to her. I'm glad that I say this and I did send this to her to tell her how I felt. thank you for this poem.
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CrystalThis poem is the most perfect poem. I have just drifted from a friend and it describes the hurt to a T. I think you have a gift for poetry and hope to see more poems from you. This is the best poem about friendship I have ever read.
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LisaThis poem totally touches on how I am feeling about someone in my life right now. Times have been tough, and I think I will give her this poem...it puts my feelings into words, and makes sense of my feelings. Thank you.
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Lizvery touching, yet simple, i love it
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AleciaWOW..This captures exactly what I am going through with my best friend. He will be leaving soon, and well he is basically distancing himself.anyway..I sent it to him basically as a final Good-Bye and to let him know I will always be someone who cares
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JosephI have read poems in the past, but this one grabs the heart and speaks the truth.
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NikkiThis poem was very beautiful, it made me cry. I know what it is like to lose a best friend. I knew my best friend since I was 5, i'm 16 now and it's been 3 years since i've spoken to her, and we go to the same school, but it a pain that i still suffer, but i suffer in silence, and even though i have a great new best friend, that quiet pain is still there and this poem really brought it out.
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rachelyour poem made me realize that perhaps i had hurted the girl who's friendship w/me is broken. i think it's time for me to make the 1st move and admit my mistake. i really miss her.
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AndreaThis poem is exactly like the type of friendship my best friend and I have. I'm sending it to him and hopefully he will like it as much as I do.
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RAINEEI WANT TO THANK THIS AUTHOR ON CATCHING MY EXACT FEELINGS. I MISS MY BEST FRIEND, AND KEEP ON TRYING TO MAKE AMENDS BUT IT SEEMS THAT WE HAVE DRIFTED TO FAR APART. HE WILL NOT MAKE TIME FOR US. THANK YOU AGAIN FOR HELPING ME EXPRESS MYSELF.
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loti love your poem. it completely describes my friendship with my best friend that has fading already just because of our misunderstanding. i've realized that it really hurts to loose a freind who's been so dear to you. and as of now what only remains is but of memories to cherish.
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KimI truly can relate to this poem. It really touched me. There was this good friend I had and when he went off to college I was left feeling lonely. I haven't talked to him for a while and this poem really reminded me of him. Thank you-I really needed that!
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TINAi love this poem the best one on the site... thanks
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AshleyI thought that this poem was good. It reminds me of my old friend and I relationship.
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DieterIt touched my soul and spelled the words I coudn´t find I sent it to my love and whenever I reed it , I start to cry
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vannait is a great poem. It hits home!!! It reminds me of those people that i love but just fight with. i am going away to college and this is a great poem for them.
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Jimexcellent, your words and style hit the mark. True talent. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work
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LaurenI loved this poem..it expressed exactly what I was feeling.It made me cry..but it made me happy at the same time..because it also made me realise some things.
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aminaI read through these poems and Judy yours was so good. It's simple yet meaningful.
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Eremonthere are pomems that we all can relate to and make us smile . . . .this is on of those
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DebbieI really related to this one! (In more ways than one!) It is a beautiful poem.keep writting!
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AshleyWhen I read this poem I couldn't believe how true it was about me and this guy. Him and I used to be friends but now I guess we are not. Anyways, without me going into anyhting, the poem says it all.
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shandraI was very glad to finally find a poem to express exactly how I was feeling. My best friend and I constantly end up fighting so we stopped the drama and stopped our friendship all together but I realized that we still have a friendship. A silent one.
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DebbieVery inspirational and true to the touch
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elissaThis was a poem that touched me. This was also a poem that saved a dead friendship. I had this friend that made me a new person when I was with her. One day it all stopped. The poem described every emotion I ever felt about her. When I sent it to her she cried ...for me ...just once. It made a difference in the way she looked at me. Thank you.
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ShellyThis is a wonderful poem that not only reminds me of special friends that I no longer see but also of my ex-husband and the feelings I have for him. Even though we didn't make it as a couple he is still a very good friend.
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KeilaI thought this poem was very intreding.I liked this poem so much that I wrote it to a friend/person that I was not sure if we were still friends because of the problems we are haveing.I just hope she writes back and we can be best friends again.Don't worry Judy I didn't say i wrote it.
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Debbiehey.. this poem really touched me, and i'm not sure if i should send this to someone i know. She said our problem was over, however there is still a gap and i really hope we could be friends again.
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AshleyI love this poem! It describes my relationship with one of my friends perfectly. If I could write poems, I would definitely write something like this!
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M.Your poem touched my heart. It reminded me of a faded friendship that was special to me. The feelings expressed were very beautiful and sincere.
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KaceyThis poem explains my friendship I once had with my friend. We have recently parted and I miss him very much. This poem is great!
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JulianaThat was an awesome poem. I can definately relate to it and that is why I like it so much. It was well written and the feelings are expressed wonderfully.
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Debbeautiful Judy, loved this, held me from start to finish it hurts to lose a friend, I lost one 2 years ago, still hurts.
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