I met a man who couldn't get past the fact that I am a woman and not a china doll - to be put on a shelf and left there to be admired. I am a woman, I'm not a mystery.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

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No Mystery
by Gothic
You look into my eyes and see things you don't understand.
Am I a mystery? I think not.
You look at my smile;
You search for something that isn't there.
Am I a mystery? I think not.
You listen to my voice, and call me an angel.
This angel is flesh and blood,
Not a doll to be put on show.
You see - I'm not a mystery.
I am me.

I am flesh and blood.
Touch me; I wont break.
There's no mystery here.
Caress me; feel the warmth.
I'm not a mystery; I am Woman.

Here I am - desires abound;
Relentless and sensuous - yours to caress
Like a flower; make me bloom.
Don't stop; not even to rest!
No mystery here; Just a Woman.
I feel the weight of your body against mine;
Your heaving breath upon my skin.
The most gentle touch on my thigh,
The soft nibbling on my breasts -
Moving slowly in a downward motion.
Now you see,
I'm no mystery; I am YOUR Woman.
I am all Woman.
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35 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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    THIS IS A POEM THAT MADE ME SHED SOME TEARS. IT IS WHAT I'M GOING THROUGH RIGHT NOW.
  • Nancy
    This poem is wonderful!It captures women excellently
  • Patti
    I sent this to my boyfriend as he always called me his angel.He sometimes forgets that all I want is for him to see me!
  • ja
    This is the most realistic exotic poem i ever read the reason is so realistic is because men do tend to look at women as a mystery why? we are women that want to be loved and caresses in the most innocent purest form of love to me there shouldnt be any mystery at all
  • Becky
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  • chatelaine
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  • Claunecia
    I am also a poet and love your poem No Mystery. It is very fulfilling and one of the best I have read tonight
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