It's so easy to get so completely and entirely caught in someone else. Especially, when you don't won't to face yourself.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

Want You.
Want you,
want you, you, you,
Doesn't matter that you're not here,
I forgive all the silences.

I want you,
I don't care,
I know you'll disappoint,
I'm a willing captive,
Why fight?
There's no point.

I want you,
Need to hold you in my arms,
Need to smell your sweat, inhale your breath,
Need you inside of me,
That's where you belong,
That's where you were meant to be.

I want you, bald, fat and ugly,
I really don't care,
I just want you to be there.

I want to open your door,
Because I have my own key,
I want to come in,
Because you too, now want me.

I want you to need me,
I want to stare in your eyes,
I want your promises,
I don't care if they are lies.

I want your body,
Warm in my bed,
I want you near me,
I want you so bad.
54 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
  • deja
    this is the best i have read all nite
  • Jordan
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  • Kym
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  • Connie
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  • DENISE
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  • Tabatha
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  • wilfy
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  • Veda
    i love your poem. it make me think of him.
  • jaz
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  • Kaitlin
    This is a great poem this just reminded me of this one boy that i really like and he likes me but we are not together yet. great Poem
  • vernell
    TO WHO EVER WROTE THIS POEM,IF I COULD I WOULD GIVE YOU SIX THUMBS UP. THIS POEM HAAS REALLY TOUCHED ME,IT GAVE ME THE LOVE OF MY LIFE. AND I JUST WANTED TO THANK YOU FOR THAT,AND IF THERE WERE ANY TYPE OF CONTEST FOR THIS POEM,I'LL GIVE YOU THE NUMBER ONE PRIZE. THANKS ALOT!
  • Rachel
    This poem touch me in ways I couldn't say
  • Sharlie
    The humanistic craving of ones lover
  • R
    i thought the poem explored desire, not lust and i related to it.
  • Sharare
    i love ur poem so much,because it remindes me of me and my crush craig
  • SHana
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  • angel baby
    this is a great poem this is what i have been trying to say to my boyfriend thankx for making it easy to say
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  • abbas
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  • seida
    That was exactly what i was looking for. It is exactly how i feel about the man of my dreams.
  • sonyia
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  • Nancy
    Great poem. sometimes we fall for someone who isn't attractive but for some reason the attraction is magnetic.
  • robin
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  • Sarah
    Great poem. Right to the point.
  • Melanie
    Even though iam only 11 I still love this poem because it explanes what i feel inside of me without the boy i truley love!
  • anna
    I'll send this to my fella. It's everything I want to say but didn't know how to.
  • Ozzy
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  • Yari
    i feel you nazzle its exactlyhow i feel i dont care what anybody said i just want to be with my baby 1love hoolaaa (:
  • maria
    I like this poem becouse it reminds me of something that hapend to me in real life
  • Angela
    this one is great love it
  • Rosie
    I read your poem and I love it.It reminds me of this guy that I really want He knows it too but he wont say anything.
  • Andi
    I am living this poem
  • Celestine
    This poem in so many ways, not only relates to how one couple may feel about each other but couples in general. Basically everyone can relate to the poem. Awesome!!! Gotta Love it!!
  • florance
    grate
  • Janice
    Talk about horny and desperate.
  • marilyn
    Very touching, very deep, with lots of feeling and emotion. Keep up the good work.
  • Jennefer
    It was extremly wonderful. I feel that way about my other half. She did a beatiful job.
  • aswathi
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  • Sophie
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  • Alvaro
    congratulations bionic woman you feel the real love, thank you for bring your creativity and inspiration to all. I wish you the best.
  • NOREEN
    HI I LOVE THE POEM IT WAS SO GOOD YOU BUT IN TO WORDS WHAT I WAS FEELING THANK YOU DONT STOP WRITING YOUR GOOD , AND AGAIN I SAID THANKS
  • jessica
    this is the best poem i read so far . this is the same way i feel when i talk to my boyfriend i always wish that he was beside me but he wasn't . but i love this poem and i would read all of your poem cause they are to good
  • ann
    i love this poem!
  • Crystal
    I loved the poem. It reminded of my boyfriend.
  • Sarah
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  • Lariza
    This poem is so nice I really liked it I send it to my boyfriend that's how much I liked it.

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