#11 My Heaven
This was written for man that has shown me how to receive and share, not just give. I can only try to describe how he makes me feel, I hope someone else can relate to this poem, everyone should be this close to heaven just once.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems
My Heaven
I look deep in your eyes. I see there what I feel inside. We share something between us, Neither one of us can hide. I feel your lips touch mine, I loose all my control, All it took was a look and a kiss, To know you were part of my soul. I see your hands on my skin, I want and need you to do more, The passionate look you give me, Tells me heaven is in store. I feel your need against my thigh, I know you will fulfill every wish,. We were made to fit together, And all it took was a look and a kiss. I look deep in your eyes, And I see heaven there inside, You make me feel so beautiful, What I feel for you I cannot hide. |
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1999
Kamma Roberts
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136 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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APRILit is just how i feel about my girlfriend i couldn't have said it better,there are a lot of poams in here that i love they are just what i want to say. thank-you
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jillThis poem says everthing about the afternoon I met the man I will marry. We met online and then he came across on the ferry. I could not believe what i was reading it was every emotion I felt when he first kissed me.
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RebekhaBy the time I was done reading it I was crying. It has captured every feeling I had about my man when we first met, and still now.
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CONNIEI have a boyfriend and I feel just like this poem describes. I love it.
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crystali give it 4 stars! i love this poem because it explains how i really feel about this person that has my heart.
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BETTY JOETHIS POEM REALLY EXPRESSES THE WAY I FEEL TOWARD MY BOYFRIEND I LOVED IT
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kellyi think the pome was grate it remnids mi of how i feel about my ex we hav split up but im hopein to be with him again soon i love him so much
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AngelaI love this poem so bad cause it's excatly what I'm feeling gor my man. Your a great poem writer, Keep them coming.
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briti really liked this poem it reminded me of my lover and how i feel when i look into his eyes. keep up the good work its an awsome poems one of the best ive ever read.
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annetteyour poems brought tears to my eyes because it feel like we make up the same thing and keep up mthe good work and don't forget to be you all the times
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tamaraWhen I read this poem, it made me think of my man. This is exactly how we feel for eachother. I really enjoyed it. Keep em' coming.
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ShannonI Love this I just sent it inside a card to my deployed Marine the love of my life!
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JacquelineIt was beautiful and amazing. Very Nice job
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Mohamedvery very very Good Nice Poem ( Kamma Roberts )
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sonyellI loved this poem its just the words Ifeel like saying to my baby. Thanx!
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ShannonI loved this poem. I would like this author to write more poems like this one. I thought It was really powerful and touching.
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CathyYour words totally describe how I feel for my husband of 17 years. He is now deployed to Germany so through your beautiful words I am able to express my love and feelings in ways I could never describe myself, thanks.
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JeannetteThis is the best poem I have read so far. I have been a poet for over ten years and this is one of the few poems some else has wrote that truly touched me. GREAT JOB.
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JessicaThis poem was very thoughtfull and some people could not understand her words unless they have found someone who they dream about and can not wait to see. This poem tuched me dear to my heart, it reminds me of my true love.
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MainulI am feeling good after this poem reading. As I believe Simple with the best. Thats way This poem is really simpley but unexpression language express by the poet. And here is privew of dream and heavan. That a couples future and feelings. Thank you and thanks the poet. Have a nice day wishing by. Arif
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paulaThis is a amazing poem. Your emotions jump right off of the page. real life events are the best thing a poet can right about. This poem was very heartfelt and exstremly well written. It's wonderful you could find someone who made you feel all of those emotions. Your are an exstremly wonderful writter. Hope you continue your work.
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christyMy boyfriend proposed to me last night infront of 200 people in a restaurant. I am still overjoyed and find it hard to express what i feel. This poem fits perfectly!thankyou
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NaazI really like ur poems from the core of my heart. These poems work like a love bridges between me n my luv. Sometimes i feel that these poems are written only for me coz my every feeling towards my luv is expressed in it. so thanx alot for giving me such a precious gift by that i'll be able to express my emotions n feelings to my luv.
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briani showed my gf this poem and were going threw a really tuff times right now and it touched her. thank you for sharing that piece with me. it ment alot to me
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alysiathis reminds me so much of the love i am in right now. so sweet yet simple. a look and a kiss is all it really takes!
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PhytreseiaTHis is a great poem to show a man that his woman care and that he is always on her mind
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TIts touched me. the deepest chord of my soul
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Ashleyi love this poem so much the first time i read it, it made me cry a little you did good writting this
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amandathis poem has got my vote all the way because it true. how people feel about there spouce and true love. i know when i read it it reminded me of how i feel about my love. though there are no words that truley tell i really feel.
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LesleyWow, what an amazing poem, it certainly was very moving. Thank you
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ShawnaAmazing. Truly amazing. Some one who can say what i am sure a lot of people feel.
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HeatherMy sailor is defiently "my heaven"! Beautiful work!
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APRILI REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED ME. AND I CAN ABSOULUTELY RELATE BECAUSE ALL IT TAKES IS FOR MY BOYFRIEND TO LOOK AT ME AND I GO CRAZY.
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FrancesABSOLUTELY INTOXICATING! I sent this to my boyfriend because it said everything that I wanted to say to him. Thankyou!
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candyoh man. i like this. keep it real.
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AmyI LOVE IT! It explains exactly how I feel for my husband! U r a TRUE poet!
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CRYSTALthis poem is the best one i have ever read it take the words right out of my mouth GREAT JOB!
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kayleyi loved it !
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tarynit was so nice coz it is like me an this boy so thank you so much for that
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keandrai think that this poem is awsome you done really good on it
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DawnThis is a awesome poem. It captures exactly what I feel for my love. Thanks for the great writing.
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AshleyI loved it
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TeeTook the words right out of my mouth. Great Job!
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yvonneilike it it was good i hope u make some n=more oems about love
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ericaI thought this was awesome. Nice very nice.
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MeganThis poem tells everything that i see in my boyfriend you are a good poem writer
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SaraThis poem says all i wanted to say to my boyfriend. The way you put it was just so wonderful. You're a great poet.
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lisaWow, that was Amazing. I never thought there was anyone out there who felt the way I did. I am glad to know that there are others who feel the amazing love that I feel.
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Silviathis poem touched my heart because everything i says is true to me the person that i am go out with is my heaven i can not live without him and if one day he leaves me it will fell like hell!so this has all the vote from me!
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AndreaVery good!
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cassieoutstanding poem. it describes every thing so well and it is also words i have been looking for to tell my boyfriend. you did and awsome job on that poem keep up the good work.
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HA very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed this piece.
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jenniferi loved the poem it realy discribes how the poet feels.
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amandaThis poem was awsome, I have been married to my husband for 3 years, been together for 9 years. When i read this it brought me back to the first day i saw him, and the first day we made love. all i have to say is thank you and WOW.
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TraceyI really love this poem, it is like how i feel about a certain guy in my life. Awsome Work
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WilletteHow powerful, it most ceretainly brought tears to my eyes and overwhelmed my heart with those most wonderful words. I most ceretainly can relate have been there plenty of times in my life. Thank You for such powerful words so deeply exspressed.
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Heaven MarieI think that this poem is exactly how I feel about my fiance of 5 yrs! Thank you for writting with your heart. Weird that someone you don't even know can help you explain your love for someone! Thank you
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AMANDATHAT WAS A GOOD POEM. I GAVE MY BOYFRIEND THAT POEM AND HE HAS IT ON HIS WALL. HE REALLY LOVES IT. EVERY TIME HE LOOKS AT IT HE LOOKS AT ME AND HE COMES TO ME AND GIVES ME A BIG KISS.
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MonaOutstanding!
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ElizabethI loved it. I am in a relationship right now and everything you wrote applies. He is my heaven. thank you for putting into words.
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michelleBeautiful! You just described what I have been trying to find the words for. Thank you for sharing!
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LORII THINK THIS POEM SAYS IT ALL FOR PEOPLE WHO HAS TOOK IN TRUE LOVE.
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JewelsThis poem describes exactly how my boyfriend/future husband makes me feel inside and out. This is a wonderful, perfect poem that you have written. I will keep a look out for your name in the future, if I need a love/romance poem again
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Lisathis poem really touched me, it put into words how I feel about the one that I love. I write poetry to, you are my new inspiration!
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Danyellthis poem is very sweet i love it this is the 1st poem I've ever like on this web site
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sarahthis poem is beautiful it captured my heart i sent it to my boyfriend and he seemed to fall for me more knowing id sent such a poem that bonded us together thanks for this wonderful artwork in words
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ZeZeLOVE IT! love it love it love it.
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LucasI just read your poem My Heaven. Since i can't write poems I used this poem and sent it to my girlfriend who i really love b/c the words you used describe everything i feel for her. She will be very happy. She just got out of a hospital. So thx for the poem.
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LisaI Love this poem. My boyfriend is in the army and Im teying to find the perfect poem to send him. This is the one. Thank you!
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mariaI have one word to say "Beautiful"
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StacyThis is so beautiful! I sent it to my husband today. It's the best poem I've read!
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PattiPerfect!
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deeAwesome. Describe what I feel for the man of my life. And the day we met.
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migueI love this poem. Anyone who read this poem wolud tell you the same.
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tonithis is so beautiful. i have found love with a friend of 15 yrs and this is how i feel . WOW!
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billgreat poem!
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JennaI LOVED it! Totally captures what I have been feeling with my lover! Thank you.
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SandyI love this peom. It express how I feel about my man. Thank you for writing it and share with me.
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SarahI loved the poem it was truly remarkable. My boyfriend loves poems but I am not a very good writer.
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JENNOH MY GOODNESS. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR POEM. SO MUCH OF IT DESCIRBES FEELINGS THAT I HAVE. I SHIVERED WITH EVERY LINE THAT I READ. IT IS WONDERFUL
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MichelleThe best word that I can think of to describe this great poem is "WOW"! Loved it!
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StaceyThis poem is beautiful. It reminds me of the very first time i saw my boyfriend, it really only take one look and one kiss. The poet really knows what she's talking about.
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DarlaThis is exactly how I feel about my husband. I couldn't of said it better. You are great!
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BoNNoAwesome (simply put)
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NeshaWhen I read this poem, I immediately knew that it was meant for me and the love of my life. Being myself a poet, I can feel the passion that the writer has and I can truly relate. Love is a beautiful thing and this poem expresses the beautiful thing that is love
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SWEETI REALLY LOVE YOUR POEM IT WAS BEAUTIFUL
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HalOne word : Beautiful!
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Erinthis was the best poem i have read in a long time. i can't even put words in my mouth to describe how good it was.. it is actually how i feel about my boyfriend.
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MICHAELI REALLY LOVED THIS POEM. IT SUMMED EVERY THING I FEEL, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT TO HER. THANKS.
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wardenwai love this poem it reminds me of me and my boyfriend i love it so much
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BarbaraThis is so true I can't believe i read this! It is great. It relates to me so much. I just got backk from seeing this guy and I feel this way right now. I was with him for 2 years and it was over. Maybe it will happen again..
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JANETIT'S A REALLY GREAT POEM
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BarbaraLovely poem, just the words I wanted to say to my new friend
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PrincesaI LOVED this poem it actually took a look and a kiss for me and my fiance to realize that we were the one for each other :)
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kandisweetIt reminded me of my relationship. It's a great poem
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mymyit was hot
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MelissaYour poem gave me butterflies it really touched me
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Thompsonas sson as i started reading this poem i teared up and by the end i was crying. It says everything that this one person means to me. thank you
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sarathis is everything i feel when i'm with him, plus some. he makes me feel as though nothing could go wrong, he makes me feel like an angel
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Sweet-RozThis poem is sweet....
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kiragirl, i know what you are talking about. when i look into my man's eyes and feel his kiss i feel like i'm the qeen of the world. he makes me feel like an angel. he is a keeper.
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JamieBeautifully written..describes exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. Never thought any words could possible describe that, I was wrong lol. :o)
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CristyI loved your poem you said everything I wanted to say but couldn't find the words. Your poem touch a place in my soul. Very good work keep it up.
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MeganI love this poem! When i read it i thought you my boyfriend. It is so sweet!
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KristieMan I am really feeling this poem because I am in a situation that this poem relates to I give it a 10 you have imagination, that's a plus.
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deeIreally like this poem keep them coming
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ashleyi loved this poem. you did a great job. this is how i feel with my fiance.
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JuliePerfect, I loved it. This is exactly what I wanted to read!
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MonicaI thought that this was a great poem and it describes how I feel about my loved one and I thought I would have never found something that would actually describe how I feel for him. Glad that I could read this.
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KristiThis is a wonderful piece of writing ..
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HeatherI completely agree with what this poem says, I have definitely been there before :)
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danthis is a very good poem'i like it
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KeithBrilliant
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PetraI really can relate to this poem. It is exactly what I feel for my boyfriend. I'm going to read it to him tonie when I see him. YOU GO GIRLFRIEND!
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LaylaI liked this peom so very much, excellent job:)
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jamesyou did a beautiful job on that.
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Tammythis poem was beautiful and anyone who s ever loved can relate to this poem
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kristini loved the poem, and the way your feelings were expressed in words
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LitaThis poem is so sweet! I like it alot!
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KatieI absolutely LOVED the poem My Heaven. It totally describes how I feel for my love; only I could not put it into words. Thank you so much.
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SheilaI really love this poem.It relates on the relationship that me and my boyfriend sharing now. This poem is wonderful!
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Stacyyour poem was wonderful. I understood yo completely. I'm a poet myself and your work is very extrodinary. Keep on writing.
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Dustinthat's a great poem I like they way you say all of your feelings from your heart good poem
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Heart_of_JazzThe poem flowed smoothly... and it was Lovely...
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AmberThis a poem that lovers can relate.
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MarlaI can relate to it. I think I might send this to my boyfriend.
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LawryWhile this poem was written for and by a woman, this man thought it expressed his thinking so well that he sent it to his love.
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Anne-Mariei coudn't find the words, so you did it for me! It's a beautiful poem, it really is, it discrives how you can feel about someone else, what you feel for someone else, just in the right words! thanx
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TaraThis poem is beautiful, it says just what I feel, I'm making a collage of beautiful sayings for him for Valentine's day, and this is just what I was looking for!!
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CareyThis was a beautiful poem. :)
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AMVI very much relate to this poem I have the joy of having someone who makes me feel this special in my life, just want to say that this is a beautiful poem and that its true everything you say on it ..True Love Does Exist you describe it very well.
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BethThis poem realy got to me it reminds me of me and my boyfriend and i love it very much.
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MollyAbsolutely beautiful. I wish I'd written it
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JohnnyThis poem I really liked because sometimes just a look and a kiss is all you need.
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Sarahi really enjoyed reading your poem
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linamanassurely I was this close to heaven once.
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