#83 First Time Love
Throughout my depression, I thought I could never love. That is, until a woman showed me the great things of the world and she touched my heart in a way I could never describe. And I fell in love for the first time.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems
First Time Love
For the first time in my dismal life I feel love flow in my heart the same heart once thought cold and lifeless fills with glorious joy and happiness because of a woman whose spirit is full of passion her eyes that shine like sapphire stars filled with warmth and beauty a smile that brings happiness to my sad existence I have never known love until now because of the way she touched my heart took hold of my depressed soul and showed me the beauty of life's wonders everything that I thought impossible all seems to be within my grasp I see everything in a new light because of something I thought unworthy to feel to feel love's tender kiss and I bask in its beauty so because of the feelings of a woman whom I would love now and 'til my heart beats its final note to life's great song |
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Lonely Shadow
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44 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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stephaniethis poem is great! i loved it. every word just made me remember my feelings wow. great job!
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sonecathat a pretty poem that you write
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WarrenThis poem touched me in a way and sent me shockwaves of different emotions. it was well written and it showed how some people feel with their first time love. I was feeling happiness, sadness and joy. This is the poem that I love alot. Keep up the Great work Loney Shadow!
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DonnetteThe words are so touching so much passion of pure love.
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VictoriaIt was such a sweet,romantic,descriptive poem. It truly expressed True Love. It showed great emotion. Bravo!
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deandranice poem
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DVery nice descriptions.
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JudithThis poem touched my hart. I cried as I read it, it speaks of my life and the love I have finally found. Thank you so very much.
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BrittanyAww. This is a great poem! Its really sweet! :)
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StacyThis poem was really great. It has touch me in a way that is unexplainable. It really explains how a person feels when they first fall in love, and puts it into words when they don't understand.
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Cindythis poem made me feel much more better and more alive. i thankyou for coming uop with this wonderful porem. love, Cindy lozano
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ArianaI thought this poem was so pretty. I loved it so much. I really like your poems!
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joannaWONDERFUL POEM.
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CherrilynThe poem really touches my soul my friend let me borrow the copy. When i read it at home I can't stop thinking how impressive the poem was. And it really reminds me of the love i ever felt with the one i love hope to read more of the authors poem.
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thembinkosiThis poem is a bomb, it touches my heart badly
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ChristinaThat poem was very nice see I need help I Have a friend who is far away and I won't see him till aug,05 I don't know how to tell him that I love him
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Staceythis is a good one
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crystalwow, its crazy how all the words that i am thinking about my true love are all in one poem!. thank you!
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NichoelThis poem reminded me so much of me and the man I am in love with. He and I was hurt in every way possible. We had a rough life that him or I would never thought we would find love or feel love for that matter! We met and fell in love with each other. Thank you for your poem it was simply beautiful!
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ireneMy boyfriend just sent this to me. It touched my soul. This poem says exactly how we both feel about each other. I'm so happy to have found a man who likes to share his feelings.
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DebiThis poem reminded me so much of the man that I am in love with. He was hurt in every way possible until there was us.
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BenI've been married for 63 beautiful years to my childhood friend.
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reynaI LIKE THIS POEM, ITS A REALLY TIGHT AND COOL POEM.
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mikeWho cant fail to be moved?Life can seem cruel,indifferent,arbitrary until you meet someone you can send such a poem to,as I have. The best has truth in it. Wonderfull poem.
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wassimeit moved me and it is betiful
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NickThe poem is great. It has showed me ahole new thing!
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DawnI thought your poem was simply beautiful! I too had a rough life that I never thought I would find love or feel love for that matter! I met and fell in love with my husband 14 1/2 years ago and with him he has shown me what love is. Together we have buit a beautiful family of three children. Thank you for your poem it was beautiful.
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MSimply great!
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Johnit moved me and got me the pefect Girl. Thanks
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haidyi just love the poems
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BillMy deepest feelings expressed beautifully!
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BrittianyI enjoed reading this poem it was very good. Very well written
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VictorThis poem is beutiful it reminds me of my girlfriend who is my first and only love
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Chelseaim used to writing my own poems so i can relate to them nore but this one i felt totally touched, even though it is about a girl i just fell warm knowing that everyone feels like this about love.
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Tarathis poem is very beautiful..its a very good job done on it.
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TyThis poem is everything that I have ever wanted to say. It's one of my favorites.
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Kyleyour poem was great i sent it to my girlfriend cause i feel the same way and wouldnt know where to go in life without her
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MindySo true and well expressed.
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Johnthis poem is one of the best I have raed, it moved me
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desirei love all your poems so keep writing them we all enjoy reading them to each other.
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