#3 Alone
This poem is about the feeling of betrayal. The feeling of only being recognized when there is no one else around. As if no one is close and there is no one to share feelings with.
This poem originally was published in Sad Poems
Alone
I am alone, so very alone I hurt, so very bad I am ignored, just thrown aside I am security, for others to have I am lonely, there is no one close, no one sees the pain I cry, hope is gone I am alone, and no one knows |
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1999
Stefani Baucom
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180 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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shortyi lov this poem it is how ifeel
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gI KNOW THE FEELING
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forrestpain is not your enemy. it simply proves one exists. the saying "keep your friends close and your enemies closer" holds some food for thought regarding this poem. we can keep the enemy of "alone-ness" close and in a sense control it. or even use it. how you do it or what you do with it is up to you. some enemies can be very good friends at times. i deal with these enemies daily
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PhyliciaThis poem really says how I feel. I mean, I love my friends and family, but sometimes they can just be so blind. Its like they dont see me when I am hurt, and I just feel alone.
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PaulaJust know this feeling. Says everything without saying too much.
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tabbythat poem rocks
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radhikajst awesome , no words to say tht how fabulous this poem is i can say this bcozz i m right now in the same situation !
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HannahBeing alone is sooo not worth it. I've been down that road and back so many times, It just plain sux! So dont think of it as being alone, think of it as casting them out for not understanding that ur hurt and now U need the security, nt thm.
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DianaThis poem got so much emotion out of me that I didn't know was there. I can totally relate. Bravo.
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SamuelCurrently living it
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MardenI really Love yOur pOem yOu tOuched me. i just feel yOur pOem sO much! I lOve it! Keep writing yOur awsOme!
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ravini feel like that alot this poem is my exact thoughts on paper or computer shall i say
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SEXY MAMAI LOVE THIS POEM SO VERY MUCH , IT HAS TOUCH ME AND I JUST LOVE IT AND NO WORDS CAN SAY HOW MUCH I LOVE IT . WHOEVER WROTE IT , WELL U ARE DOING A FANTASTIC JOB AND KEEP IT UP.
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dominiqueLoves it=)
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candicei reason this poems touch me cause it a little the truth about me and i hope that i can write a poem just like this ~`~love scooby~`~
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benjaminI see my self in that poem because it is me no one knows how i hurt inside so i move alot because of the pain i give you a 10
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DIANEi like every thing
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ziggyI know how u feel. i feel like that mostly every day.
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cortanythis is a really good poem. it have a lot to say if you are lony. who ever wrote that grate good. that really inspried me.
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nurulI salute the author of this poet. i am really in this poem shoes right now. i feel so lost. im abandoned by my frens and lost my loved ones. no shoulder to cry one. this poem is short yet sweet and brilliant. to the author good poem!
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AleksandraI really loved this poem because it brought tears to my eyes and it touched my heart because this poem Alone reminds me of what i am going through in life right now, and how i feel in life. No one loves me and no one cares about me.
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amandagreat poem alone thats how we all end up is alone even if surrounded by many
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SUshmaThis poem touched the most inner thoughts of mine I am too lonely,so I connect to this poem.
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JulieVery excellent work, emotional, quite powerful and very sad. Through and Through a very brilliant poem which deserves only the highest of highest praises.
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victoriathis what I feel like sometimes!
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brittanyi loved your pome
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jessicai like this poem because i can relate with it. i also love the way this poem is set up to read. it show not only in the words of how the author was feeling, but in the space of the words also.
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saturnthe poems describes me all da time. i loved it.
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shelbyi like it. i hope to see more but you have to put in expreshion other wise people will not like it but any how i loved it
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aniathis is great love it
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cindywow! diz is "Alone" poem reminds me of da past moments that kept me alone for the long period wij i was apart from him.
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jenniferSometimes I feel the same way. People just don't get it. But very nice. jen
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Amandai like the poem so i voted for it.
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greismeli give this poem a 10 it really good.
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axlthis was very touching and fits me perfcetly thank you for writeing it
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LatashaI really like this poem because it is me that is how i fell
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shadow^_^ What an amazing poem. it really portrays the true meanings of this world. loneliness. yes it's something most ppl can't cope with and they try as hard as they can just so they won't feel it. but in reality loneliness is really the only self produced emotion that will always be with u no matter how hard u try to avoid it. It's a brutal honesty which some people can't seem to swallow. and I'm only 13 going 14. Go figure. The world's screwed up nowadays. but your poem still rocked!keep up da good work!
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ShelbyThis poem has touched my heart, because I know what its like to be all alone and no one is there to help me.
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kennaI really liked this poem, it explains me a lot because no one understands me so great job and keep writing!
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TahliaI can relate to this poem because although i have a fair few friends and a few really close ones i can feel so alone somtimes like no one understands me.
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AdrianaI really do like this poem its real sad and I basically feel the same way!If only he knew!
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AshleighThis poem is true because everything in this peopm has happened to me.
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KartikThis is exactly how I've been feeling of late
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BrookeI feel like this poem has touched me b/c I'm going through sum things & I need family & friends 2 support me,but it feels like I'm always gona b by myself like i have 2 go through it on my very own! So thanks 2 the persin who wrote this! ♥ ♥ BrOoKeNs ♥
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KristinI feel where you are when you wrote this poem
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JOSEPHthis is a good poem
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Tameemai totally know how that feels. i know what its' like to feel so alone like ur face is mask no one can see through. and see the pain ur feeling. short but to the point
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memoI really like this poem, i am doind a project and i need to use a emotional poem and I want to use this one!
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TynievyaIt's a very great poem I loved it because it was toching and caught my eye. Im doing this research on child neglect and you are one of my sources. I just want to say keep up the good work and you did a very great job because your poem caught me eyes!
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PipOh my gosh! I know just how it feels. My best friend just recently left me for another, yet i still am her support. i'm not appreciated anymore. I am alone.
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DariaI feel the same way, no one knows about me either. I think it's a good poem.
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AnneThis poem is me, in seven stanzas.
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veronicai feel just like the person who wait this i feel alone and i hope is ok with you if i post this poem on my blog
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kurupti love ur poem ae becoz i feel dat wae ae so fanx 4 da poem
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Josephhey I like this poem its the same as me
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whitneythis poems remind me of when i broke up with my boyfriend i felt exacly like what the poem said this poem was good but sad
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lynetteOh my gosh i loved this poem i started crying cuz its so beautiful. this poem representes my life that is how i always feel alone.
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Quynhi liked this poemit is very sad and sweet, because i felt the same way not so long ago.
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BrockI absolutely loved this poem. I fits me soo well right now. But i just wanted to let you know how much i liked it.
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PinkaSuch a feeling I always get in my life. I live in it everyday.
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krishthis is an excellent poem & i think the person who has wrote this poem is really alone
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andrewi have to say that this is the best poem i have ever read and is a bit of a tear jerker too, i love it
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INNESAI LOVED THIS POEM. I WAS JUST SITTING HERE LOOKING FOR A POEM TO GIVE ME AN IDEA FOR MY ENGLISH ASSIGNMENT AND I FOUND THIS POEM. IT'S THE BEST. IT DESCRIBES EXACTLY HOW I FEEL.
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GottmanThis poem is very touching to me because it explains how I feel every single day at school. I'm pretty much a loner and I don't have any friends. Everyone just goes about their lives and don't even notice me. I'm always alone.
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AntoniaThis poem really touches my heart. Its like exactly whats goin on in the mits of my life right now. I wanna thank this author for posting this and letting me know Im not as 'Alone' as I may feel.
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paristhis poem is great.
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RuquyaI looooooooove it! It's so good. The best.
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MayraI think it's a good poem, even though it's short. Iwished it was longer.
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LoriThis poem really touched me because I feel just as this poem describes. The love of my life is moving away today and I feel "alone". I think that this author should really be recognized and well-respected for her work. This is one of the best poems I've yet to read.
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brittanythis poem made me cry so long my friend just died 3 months ago I don't now how I feel about this I just Feel.
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KatieThis poem is extremely good and I feel excactly the same as you do. I'm using this poem on a project of mine for school and yes I am going to give you credit. Well thanks for the great poem.
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christhat poem describes me all the time
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deonandreayoue a very good writer. keep up the good work
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RaechelOMG that poem is my life put into words! thats exaclty how i feel its like no one cares and that ill always be alone.
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catherineThis poem was really touching! I loved it and sent it 2 most of my friends! I liked it because sometimes I felt this way excactly!
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Amandeepo my god this poem is such a good poem. when i read it, it just beep my heart. i really like it. thanks to that author who wrote this poem for people to read. this is the best poem . it s all true you can feel it.
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BeckyIt is how I feel, but could not put my feeling into words
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brianai feel the same way
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AsaIt was exacly what I was thinking, it was just so perfekt.
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sashwell i have had it hard and i was really lonly and messing wit the computer and just started reading poems and i found this one and its the best out of all of them
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Melaniei really like this poem and it reminds me alot of myself, i actually wrote a poem called alone and i will post it soon
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Mill-Zeei see wut ur goin through, im doin the same. but ur peom is saweet.
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corinne & christinathis poems is so true. some of our closest friends treat us in that way sometimes without even noticing! its so true.
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jasmineI really love this poem.
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Tishathis poem was fab butif you made it longer it would've been great.
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StephanieI love this poem because its very touching. Its also EXACTLY how i feel every single day of my miserable life
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Kaylait feels like its me and when nobody cares for me! i love this poem
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LindaI really liked the poem! I could have written it myself, it was so like me.
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Brittany (708)hey this is a great poem and i think you should keep writing. also i knwo how you feel.
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pavelo wow this poem is so true i wonder where u get ur insporation from it must be so hard to write something as original as that. the theme and the topic art overused at all these days.
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LorettaOMG! when i read your poem, it was just so true i got shivers. it chilled me. poems usually don't have an effect on me, but when i read "Alone", something came over me. I could feel your anguish. Stefani, you are an AMAZING poet! the next shakepeare, i swear. I'm so sorry you feel so depressed. You are not alone. Many brilliant artists were depressed. Like Sylvia Plath. And Edgar alllan poe. Keep writing. you have a talent. oh, your words. they are so poignant, tormented. wow. im getting shivers again. i am going to go cry. my boyfriend just dumped me:(
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ShaneThis is a Beautiful poem. It made me think of times when i felt alone and lost thinking that no one ever cared about me.
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chantelto tell you the truth that this is how i feel all the time and this poem is also a good one but you are never alone there are other that feel alone to
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natalyi liked ur poem. it explains exactly how i feel. i feel so lonely. i have my friends, and i know they're there but the persons that i would want to have by my side (my family) don't seem to understand me. i feel so lonely and without anyone to go to. so isolated. and don't know what to do. i don't know how to react to everyone around me. no one knows the way i feel. no one takes the time to ask me "what's wrong" or "what's going on?" i feel lonely and ur poem described my feelings very well, thank you.
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shyjuhey that poem is sweet. reason. ? its simple, rhyming and message clearly conveyed.
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christieI LOVE THIS POEM AND I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO IT I UNDERSTAND COMPLETELY WHERE YOUR COMIN FROM =( IT'S SAD IT ALMOST MAD ME CRY
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DavidThis is a beautiful poem. I can relate to every word of it. My heart goes out to you. You are not alone.
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ImanieI thought this poem was great it was a short poem but so much at the same time. It was truely inspiring and beautiful!* love always the 1 and only but never lonely iman aka imanie*** :)
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JenniferIt quite simple to understand its exactly how ive felt at some point in my life
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Padeei like it very much! it matches me perfectly!
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shanaiI can really understand this poem it's exactly how i'm feeling now. I hate the fact that i'm so alone and no one even knows. They just don't take any notice. Great poem. Keep up the good work!
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pauleicethis is a very touching poem and i think you have lost of potential to write more and more every day. much love from someone who was touched by your words Thug princess. keep up the good work.
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BrittanyI think that was very good I give a 10
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pa houavery touching.
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kritikaI'm going through the same feeling right know. i feel so lonely. so alone. my world has turned his back on me too. Everyone is around me but i still feel so lost and alone. its eating me inside. When people see u all happy they have no idea that all we wanna do is cry. dam i hate that i can not hate him. he made me so miserible. your poem is so short. but every word has it's own depth. it's own pain. good work
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Jenniferdam girl your poem is awesome that exactly how I feel right now
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hmmmit was so beautiful poem.
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marissayour poem really touched me and it really expresses how i feel rite now you have a great mind.
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kathythis poem is wonderful,because now I know that there is someone else in this world that feels exactly like I do. It is worded perfectly.
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MARYThis poem was wonderful, I think you did a great job! Keep writing poetry!
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Tonnikai fell the very same way this poem is talking about! It makes me want to cry but i know there will be someone for me in the after life!
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JaneI voted for this because I feel the same way as Stefani does. I am always alone. I guess I don't really like to socialize with others. My teacher, he helped me go through this, I just felt like I needed to share that with a person going through the same problem as me.
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Tyler Annomg, i really loved this. i feel so alone 2, but nobody knows it since i don't let em. it's bad enough being alone and not having anyone there 4 u, but it's also embarrassing when other kids C me and i'm always by myself, ya know. it sucks.
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taniaI loved this poem cause I feel the writers pain. I am alone and now there is no one that can ever take my heart and mend it back to one.
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AnnThis poem applies to me in so many ways. Maybe I am not as alone as I thought.
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JenniI loved it because i feel the same way
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mikethis poem is the truth of how i really feel. about how i am everyone elses shoulder to cry on but yet i am alone. im everyones security but i have no one. i sit at home all alone. no one ever calls me to hang out, to go to the movies or anything. but yet they call when they have problems. whether they mean to do this or not, i am still alone.
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GeordanThis poem was good n i felt alone when i read it love is hard to find so cherish wut u have
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AshleyThis is a so true poem and I think this is a great peom to share. Thank you and if I had to give this peom a vote from 1-10 I would give it a 10.
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melI know exactly wat ur going through, i feel the exact same way bout my life. Just be strong!
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KristabellI love this poem! Great job. You captured how I sometimes feel. Great! Keep on writing.
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shellyi love this poem - it really expresses what i'm feeling right now and that there are actually other people out that who feel what im going through right now
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Heatheri really think that this poems explains how i always feel. im always alone and dont have anyone here to be with me when i feel sad or angry or upset or mad or happy or any emotions. im always depressed. and this is the kind of poem i can really relate to. i really like it.
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wilnai liked your poem, it reminds of howw i feel when there is no one to turn to, no one to hold, no one to return the love
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all_the_nickswow. It so hit me. why do we feel alone like this though. Do we do this to ourselves
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francisthis is a great poem. i feel what the poets saying. in every word you feel pan and sympathy for the poet.
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samanthaIt's like this poem was meant for me. This is exactly what i'm feeling right now.
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JenniferI love this poem, it expresses what I am going through right now.
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LeahIts so ironic how seeing things like this poem shows us that were not alone b/c we all feel this way sometimes. yet we do all feel alone sometimes. this is a great poem!
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PhantomA poem so simple and yet, so true, describing the deep within me that so many times I cannot just forget about it. And yes, noone knows, or understands. I met a person this year that I found to share so much with when it comes to pain. Too bad we can't be together.
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nadiaThis is truely how i feel at times and majority of people feel this way totally even if you vant see it on there face. fab
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jamessimply the best
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Tara LynnI love this Poem! It sounds like its all about me becuase i feel like im the only one on this earth. Keep on writing. Keep up the good work!
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tiffanyI think that poem was very sad and it made me think of my dad. My dad died of brain cancer in 1999 September 14th. That poem is very special to me in many ways.
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kritaYes this peom reminds me of how i feel since i lost my daddy. The first day i met him i called him dad and 10 years down the road i still do. So i juss wanted to say I love ur poem.
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brookei logged onto the internet to find a poem that expresses how I feel. to communicate - I sent this to my husband. some people will never understand that no matter how many people surround you, you can still be utterly alone. Thank You
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shainagurl i know just how u feel and ur poem is so inspirational. i think that poem should hit #1
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joannai read this poem and i would relate to this person i am hurting inside and noone knows i put on a smile when inside and falling apart
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Toreythis reminds me of my best friend she is always alone and she always talks about killing her self.
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Gina*Gasp* I LOVE YOUR POEM. I totally feel your pain. FINALLY, a poem that describes my feelings EXACTLY! Thank you soooooo soo much!
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sarahi loved your poem! you speak what's in your mind and in your heart. you are a true poet and you will become someone!
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amythis poem reminds me of when i was going through that of course i still am but at least i know i'm not alone
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terai love this poem i give it a 10 because thats just like me THE POEM IS GRAET
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jakeWow, well I think you had exprested your fellings very well, and I think you did a wonderful job on it, and I hope you continue doing it. I think that your poems was very sweet.
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FatimahI so. Can Relate. Once i felt This Way itZ like that day This Person Went into mind And Saw what And how i waz feeling and Then wrote the poem. !. Itz totally beautiful. SometimeZ plp are lonely and Really nobody knows or sees it!
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Ritathis poem discribes me this poem is great
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michelleyour poem really hit home it is really sooooo true thank you!
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StacyI like this poem, yet i hate it. No offense but I think that It rminds me of myself alot. I like it. Good job
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Lozthis made me cry coz i can relate 2 this so much. iv felt the huge lonliness of noone seeing how much i hurt. this poem made me realise that there are many other pple in the world who feel the same pain
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KarenI really like your poem. I can really relate to it. I feel alone but no one knows about it because I always cover it up with a smile. I give your poem a 10.
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cindyIf i ever wanted to say how u feeel i would never find truer words than this poem. Thank you
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sylviai really love this poem, it really present the fact about we people.
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CristianThis is one of the best poems I have ever read,I can also relate to this poem, most of the time I feel alone, and nobody knows.
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briannaThis poem made me cry because its ture. I have no friends and I'm 15 and am done durgs because of it and nobody cares.
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Alishathe last few years I have sat feeling this horrible hurt but I had yet to pick a word to decribe it andthis poem summs it up, Alone
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nikkii can so relate this. i didn't find my best friend until i got into jr high. but as seniors she found a boyfrind she said it wouldn't change but it did. like this perfect 10
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ALICIAYOUR POEM WAS VERY SAD BUT I LOVED IT!
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SOPHIEI REALLY LOVED DA POEM..COZ IT'S REALLY SIMILAR 2 MY LUV STORY..IT ALSO SO TRUE..
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Ayeshaa very true poem, i like it.
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MohammedThis poems does not only describe the feelings that are hidden inside some hearts, but it also tells others to know about us
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EllaI think this is one of the most beautyful poem i have ever read!And I can really relate to it, I'm all alone, but no one knows.
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kristinawhat a great poem. I sometimes feel this way and people will never know.
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RamboTrue poem.sensative.
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angelai feel this way
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pamelai always feel alone i know where your coming from!
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exWiZardIt shows how I was feeling before Irene age. Very sad poem bad at the same time presents our feelings. Very Good
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cammyvery true poem.im feeling very alone at the moment so this poem makes me feel better to see that everyone goes through the same thing at some time
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HannaI reall like this poem.. its somehow relates to how i feel.. im really glad to that person who made up this poem.. its like a story describing all about me.. =)
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kareni can feel and understand this poem. thank you, it comes from a real place, stay real to thy own self be true, draw strengh from truth. the world is full of two kinds of people, your poem refects one catagory, look for the other catagory, you deserve it. Thanks
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elizabethI think it was a really good poem because thats how I feel sometimes when I'm alon.
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JeanaI can relate with this poem a great deal.
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ShineIt's short and very simple poem.
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SuzzieIt is a very true poem. Just about everyone is like this even though they don't show it or not.
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MatthewAlone...and no one knows? Of course they wouldn't.... Popular, and everyone knows. But alone and unnoticed.
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KarenExcellent, I can really relate
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AngelaI really like this poem coz its very touching and emotional.
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MichelleI really like this poem I can really relate to that.I'll be 18 soon and none of my true friends seem to care. years back I felt so alone.
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ToniAll I have to say about this poem is: Very, Very true . . .
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ElsieI can relate to this poem very much.it's few in words but the message it sends is sharp.
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SteveI Think this poem was a great inspiration to me because i had always pondered suicide. But now i finally found somebody who can accept me for me
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