#21 Reality

• kayla
  i love this poem it's so true about all the pain we go through as we get older
• montse
  this poem makes me remamber of me
• ilize
  beautiful
• Phylicia
  I love this poem. It really says exactly how I feel and with such emotion in the words. With everything I have been through it is just so hard to move on from the pain and the past, because no matter how long your life goes on the pain is still present in your mind and your heart. I have not read a poem before that I could relate to as much as this one. Keep writing!
• Tamara
  what can i say, you said it all, loud and true. it's actually scary to think of how much this poem related to me, and others. you thinks it's only you, but this proves that others feel it too. this poem is touching and truely amazing.
• marcie
  Suthern your poem made me think of my uncle and everyone that lefted me i really like your poem keep up the good stuff and dont give up
• Lara
  I love the way the poem rhymes and touches me, the way I can relate to it. It is a great pleasure to read such beautiful yet sad poems! Thank you so much for having such a great creativity!
• Hannah
  I cant tell you to let go of ur pain, I wont. It isnt fair. Bt to love yet again, even in the midst of all of ur rage will show that ur still humam, no matter what they say. Friends are hard to find and keep. Bt I'll be ur friend! And u cant beat an internet friendship, cause theres just sooooo much looooovvvveee!
• helen
  This poem really menat something to me, i have been through this, and i have felt the pain, and i felt the pain once again after reading this poem.
• emo
  i am touched by what the author had wrote. emotions. emotions. as always, kills us deep inside. so sad. but true. am i ryt?
• Jessica
  This poem was verry good i luved it!
• iza
  Wow. What you just expressed i completely and totally get. I never thought someone could get me like that let alone feel that way too.
• anonymous
  This is an amazing poem. I resintly Lost a close friend to me. It's been over two months and I still can't seem to let go. While all my other friends seem so fine laughing at school but then theres me with this fake face,fake smile,fake laugh. This poem exsplains how I feel so perfect. Who ever wrote this peom truly know's the hurt of a lost friend.
• Tammie
  this poem really hit me hard. it explained the way i felt inside i am a 32 year old mother that has 4 children. on july 15,2003 i lost my little girl in a freak accident. prior to that i was in a very abusive relationship,and the poem is so strong it really pin pointed how people that you think are your friends are not. the world is cold,no matter what you try to do.
• nurul
  i lost two members in the family i love. it was a great pain especially when i am taking my cambridge paper. it hurts. now 3 months passed graduated from sch none of my frens appreaciated my frenship it hurts more. i tried playing my role but its all a waste. ur poems put my situation in a nice piece of rhythm im loving it. i salute u!
• Aleksandra
  I really loved this poem, because when I read it, it brought tears to my eyes, because this is exactly how I feel in life right now and this is what I am going through. No one cares for me and no one loves me that is why this poem touched me and my heart when I read it.
• Dawn
  Really good poem
• a troubled girl
  i like the poem it touches me so much. the question WHY? a disastrous question that could be ask with regrets or none. i just cant understand why we discern SUFFERINGS and PAIN that really wounds our heart
• melanie
  This poem is very interesting to me. I love this poem. Well I hope you keep up the good work!
• Melissa
  I thought this poem really brought out ur inner emotions and i really feel tht most ppl go through the same stuff in their lives this really caught me becuz im dealing with a very sick dad and i love him so much and hes gunna passaway soon and ur poem just is so real and true tht i know exactly how u felt when u wrote it. and its true ppl do feel like when they love somthing somuch they tend to lose it. its nutts but ne ways keep up ur poetry its realy well explained. *Melissa*
• jessica
  i think that this poem describes some of my feelings that im going through right now. it shows that the author is confused and hurt, and i too, am the same way. thank you for the insperation that this poem gave to me because i now know that i am not alone with the emotions that i have.
• elli
  I quit believing a long time ago, because of the things u described in this poem and other stuff.
• lilly
  its funny how we get moved with poems,that touch our heart and soul this moment,thats how i feel,love the poem thanks
• gabrielle
  THIS WAS AMAZING BECAUSE IT TRUE
• sinead
  This poem is my exact emotions and has inspiered me to write my own poem about my greatest life achievements.
• Asuzena
  wow if only the whole entire world can hear this, the poem was great i loved it and i can hear it calling me i want to say thanks for this poem it really got to me
• shadow
  this was an awesome poem that only someone talented,skilled or just plain passionete could have written. in most poems ppl write about how rainbows look preety and how much beauty it gives to the sky. but it's nice to know that someone out there recognizes pain and knows how to put it in words it takes a great mind to put real human emotions into poems and it just radiates to everyone that feels the same way so u should feel real achievement that u wrote something that a 13 year old girl relates too(me!).
• emma
  well wat can i say, a poet writter myself, i've never experienced such emotion in a poem i have come across it makes you think of life and how people can hurt you and give you so much pain. i felt that pain with the poem, i hope others did too.
• cecilia
  Your poem describes what alot of young kids feel today . i really like it b/c its what i felt these past few years of my life. with all the pain giving up, the drama i had with old friends. you put into words feelings i couldnt express to any one b/c no1 would understand.
• mila
  close to that state of mind.
• passhayla
  this is really true and real!
• harley
  i love it, it's how i feel
• Juliona
  This poem really relates to me and this time in my life, so keep up the good work! xx
• kayla
  I love this poem, it is so true!keep up the good work!
• veronica
  i realy like this poem and would like to add it to my bolg This a perfect way of expressin my feeling of hurt I be adding it to myspace blog and hope it ok with you to have read by my friends. I ve beening hurt many times and i not known how to express my self in words.
• elva
  I REALLY LIKED UR POEM!
• t
  this poem is awsome, it's well written and comes from the heart.
• ramesh
  a very good composition ,really touching
• Preston
  Oh my God, your poem related so much to the situation I am in right now. I think you should keep writing and never stop.
• krish
  never cry for anyone because for who u cry will never worth of ur tears
• Natalee
  this poem is very deep. remind me of my own poem that I wrote. the peom show pain and confuse with love and trust. I really like it very good
• Christina
  i really liked this poem. and i can really relate to much of it . good job. ChRisTiNa
• Reyna
  This Poem made me break down in tears! This is exactly how I feel! I was in a relationship for 6 years and I thought I would be happy forever, but I was wrong! I really can relate so much to this Poem! Thank You! It gives me a sense that I'm not alone!
• tia
  THIS POEM SUMS UP ALOT OF WHAT WE GO THROUGH IN LIFE. AN CONTINUE TO GO THROUGH. BY YOU WRITING IT BEGAINS YOUR HEALING. THANK-YOU
• Ann
  This poem. touched me because I can relate to it. I'm walked on by all my friends but i'm too submissive to do anything about it. My one flaw is that I talk to other people about it and tell them things I shouldn't. I get myself in trouble and I can't get out. I'm currently in Depression and just seem to be going further. Reality. is something so surreal and there's hardly any good things anymore. I feel the same way. ~Ann S.
• brittany
  this poem is very sad but then again i can understand why u titled this reality because thats pretty much how life is most of the time ! realy enjoyed ur poem
• Maria
  Wow I'm having a very difficult time in my lie this poems decribes exactly how i feel but i still beleive in god.
• Kayla
  I thought it was touching and I wish in everything holy that I could write like that but I cant and it sucks but I enjoy reading good poetry especially the stuff that suits me.
• alex
  its touching i mean i know alot of ppl say they understand but it seems as if you where looking through me. well n e ways i love it. good job
• Farah
  The poem is awesome. It reminds me of my feelings back then. Very well expressed!
• Adaeze
  I will love to vote for you because i liked the poem you showed me and i pray u will win d vote.
• samantha
  while i sat thinking of all the pain that i have been through ur peom put it in words IT WAS SOO GOOD. gr8 job
• Heather
  I thought this poem was amazing. Need I say more. Read it!
• felicia
  i loved it. this poem just explained everything im feeling and trying to express to so many people that just dont understand. GREAT JOB!
• Marie
  It's great! loved it. it's all my thoughts put into 1 poem. keep up the good work. hope ot see more of oyur poems.
• sakina
  wow gurl/guy thats really touching i don't know if that really has happend to you or you just made it up but either way that was really good i almost cried i know how you feel ther in that situation because i've been there but i hope that if that really did happen to you you can get better and move on your a really good poetry writer and i'm sure that you can find somone out there thats right for you so again your a really good poerty writer so keep writing and i'm looking forward to reading more of you poetry. sincerely sakina karim
• Kayla
  From a scale of 1-10 this is a 11. lol. i loved this poem! its like an opening to another emotion! (i know cheesy)it was awesomely fabtabulouso! keep writing.
• victoria
  ithink you done a geart job you should get a 5
• Andrea
  i think this was a ery moving poem i like the way you used the words and it made em feel lots of things it was sad but great job!
• adani
  Hi, Love your poem, make me cry for the moment I read it. Feel it inside me and its make me sad. Remember the past that I cannot forget. Thank and keep up the good work.
• cakes
  this poem is deep i like it keep writing
• heather
  this poem is so life in general i love this poem
• Belinda
  This is a really touching poem, it can relate to many peoples lives and to life it self, good job.
• Kari
  This is a very awesome poem. expecially for me now. my BFF and I are fighting and i luv this poem!
• Torri
  that is a really good poem i relate to it so much that i cried.
• Me
  This poem was great many people say "I can relate to this poem" but they really don't know how your life is when you express it in a poem. I lost my uncle, cousin, brother, and best guy friend. all within a yr of each other. It's hard to move on I havent and I never will. Now I'm stuck in this life. that I dont know how to get out of. Thanks for making me see that I'm not feeling this pain alone! *I send my best wishes to you*
• Katie
  I just love the way it flows I've emailed to all my friends
• Elizabeth
  This is an awsome poem, i feel this way right now. i think a lot of people can relate to this. good job!
• chasity
  this a very good poem, it expresses ur feelings really well.
• Anne
  I like this poem because I can relate to it
• Nieshea
  Moving.
• Thamy
  "Who ever wrote this poem "you did a nice job" I think this poem is great"
• Cav
  This poems really speaks to me. I feel the same inside that I can not trust another guys because all the do is lie.
• Iasha
  I enjoyed this poem because it expressed these deep feelings in a way that could make anyone, even those unfamiliar with these emotions, relate and understand the depths of these feelings.
• Leon
  This was one of the greatest poems i have ever read. You took the harsh reality of the world and put it in utterly true words. i really liked this poem
• Manda
  OMG ur poem meant so much to me. it was like my life put into words. i always wanted to write a poem like that. but i couldnt find the words. and u did. u have alot of courage. i think ur a really great writer. KEEP WRITING. i liked ur poem so much i printed it and put it in my profile! i hope everything works out for you. thanks for letting me and everyone else know we're not the only one's
• nur
  its great and awesome. its my life
• sakura-chan
  dis poem is totally amazing! how can u trust,love some1 wen da next morning u woke up u find urself bein betrayed u express it in such a gud way!dont lose hope cuz ur world was turn upside down n somewer some1 wil guide u through da darkness n into da light. =D gud job
• ashley
  i thought it was really touchin so i printed it out hehe.
• Sasha
  The flow and Rhymes, sound great and this was a really refreshing poem to read.
• ashley
  i loved your poem! i can relate to it so much. keep writing!
• alexsis
  This poem is so much of what I am feeling, it reassures me that I am not the only one.
• Erin
  very good!
• Mathe
  It was nice. It makes me remember alot about certian family members.
• Athifa
  Brilliant and smooth writing, true and relates to life in an amazing way. love ya work
• rita
  i like this poem! i'm in this situation i don't know who 2 trust i have a big problem and i'm confused! i'm searchin 4 a good friend not a friend who stoll my bf !
• casey leigh
  your poem was awesome it fits my life so perfect. i would like to read more of them.
• Carri
  I thought the poem was amazing! It had so much truth and belief. It was great keep writing such meaningful words
• inna
  I just love this poem so much
• sukhi
  i can't belive that theres soemone in this world that feels and been through the same things as i have i can realate every line and word to myself. its a really good poem. and i hope ur happy now.
• Maria
  This poem is amazingly written. I have personally never read a better poem. Nice Job
• luE
  as, i was reading through your poem, i read it carefully and thoroughly. not skipping a word or a meaning of it. it really touched me. at the end of the poem, i was soon left wit tears in my eyes. tears of this cold sad life i've lived through. it's reality, i see that. but what can i possbily do to change anything. i can't. i just have to accept it. i just wanted to let you know. it was quite touching. and it was simply beautiful. it was like my life and my feelings. that you just brought out in words for me to finally realize it. thank you. it was great.
• kari
  wow that was so good
• Katie
  I really liked your poem. it expresses how i feel.
• Fatimah
  This PoeM is juS so Cool. I luv It! It shows Exactly how I feel. my poem are kinda similair to this but i think this is better. ohhhh! I'm gonna read it again and again!
• Amber
  This poem completly completly describes me. This is a wonderful poem!
• krisy
  i really loved your poem. I can really relate to it sounds so much like the stuff that's happend to me and the way i feel. it makes me sad knowing other people feel the same way. hope to see my of your work
• Lisa
  OMG this poem is the best poem every u should think of publishing it!
• Ro
  im only a little kid but i had people and my parents talk to me about these things, i wanted to make my older sister happy so i asked my other sister to help me find a poem for her then i found this poem, it made my older sister cry and i cried too, now i understands what it means to lose someone you love so much and taken away from you. i'm only 8 but then i know soon i will understand about love and the feeling of loosing someone you love. Thank you.
• Sumer
  I thought this poem was well worth reading, i feel that this poem is a part of me cuz thats how my life is rite now
• Vicki
  That is the best poem I have ever heard of!
• Priscilla
  I know how you feel. Cause I'm going therw the samething. We will make. And I like your pome.
• NuRaY
  This poem was a really nice poem.. the scary thing is that it can relate to soo many people that it scares..
• molly
  It describes exactly how i feel right now. Thank you.
• Sonja
  That was a very emotional poem! It was written well!
• Tamara
  I can't believe you took the words right out of my mouth. Through your poetry, you spoke the words that I have been trying to speak myself. Life is so hard when you seem to be losing the very ones that are most important to you. I know for a fact, because as I read the poem I cried. Next week I am losing someone else that means alot to me. Does the pain ever end? Becuae of poems such as yours, people may find the strength to keep going. Because of you, I will!
• andrea
  I really loved your poem. I hope to see some more of your work in the future.
• exWiZard
  I like this poem. It's the mirror of our reality. I feel it.
• cammy
  this is a very good poem, im going through a painful time at the moment so this poem helps to ease the pain to see that everyone go's through the same thing
• BekahBree
  this poem has touched me in way that i can't describe. i love it and i can relate to every word.
• Kearie
  that was so amazing! I absolutely loved it. It reapresents me almost exactly. I was so moved by it, its incredible! I am always told Im a good writer, but your better!
• Katie
  great poem..it is for sure the REALITY to the lies,deaths,1-nite- stands etc.in the 'real' view we dont usually look at !
• Rema
  I think that this poem is very touchy and somtimes I feel this way because I don't know how to move on and forget
• Kourtney
  This poem meant a lot to me I was beaten and betrayed by many people in my childhood. Mainly begginning teen years. This poem made me feel that I was not alone with being hurt when I was young and trying to trust and love when you where hurt at a young age was very hard. This poem touched me because it is very similiar to what I have gone to. It actually brightened my day.
• Nancy
  excelent
• shima
  well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
• Paula
  This is a very special poem and true. I can relate to this poem and how real is for other people in this world. This is a great poem.
• Kam
  Thank You I needed this one!!
• BettyRae
  This poem really touched my heart..so many of the words related to me..for you see I have lost loved ones myself.
• Andrea
  This poem is really uplifting, and it gets straight ot the point, Reality is somethign the we All dread, but must face is~Andrea
• Rachel
  I love this poem, I can totally relate to it. I understand what this person is going through completely. I just wanted to say that I enjoy this author and hope to see more of this persons work. Good Job!:)