#38 Next Time

• CHARMAINE
  man this pome is so true i loved it caues my mom the same way but this pome is great.
• wanda
  nice poem
• melissa
  I loved your poem. It was so romanic and sweet. I hope you guys end up together. Best wishes to ya. (:
• Marilee
  this poem was so touching!
• Kayla
  This poem really touched me. It makes me think of a certain someone who I was with a while back.
• Amanda
  this is an amazing poem good job kevin x0x0x0x0x Amanda =D
• Mellysa
  I Love this poem not only does he show his by waiting for next time but also by the fact that he knew dat being kept as a secret Lover isnt right! like he said you shouldnt have to go out in secret if you kno your in love! i love this poem.
• thla
  i really really like this poem. its just so amazing.
• yanyse
  I loved it. You really touched me with the way you put things.
• Zoe
  Kevin, I am a who is in a similar situation as your friend was. Your poem made me cry. If my special friend feels like you did when you wrote this poem, I think I'll keep him forever. You have touched me - I printed your poem and put it in my notebook.
• steph
  it makes sense. it touches the heart and brings out the emotions. simple but sweet. after all,poems were meant to be.
• jessica
  i really love this cus if this was to a boy it wound be like me and my boyfriend
• maria
  this is a very beautiful poem that really relates to me in many ways even though it was meant to be for a girl it can relate for a guy as well.
• Trey
  This poem touched me deeply. This related to me so well, that i had to tell my ex-girlfriend this poem because i wan it to be us "next time"
• danna
  yes it touched me a lot i know its talking about a girl instead of a guy but mines with a guy that poem is so sweet it reminds me so much of me and my boyfriend which has been together for 2 years. thanks danna
• aaron
  That was a smooth poem you
• Mayam
  this poem is very nice i love it so much!
• Megan
  I was with this boy 4 almost 7 months. I loved him so much. And when it came to the end of the school year he got involved in wrestling so we never got to see eachother a alot. So he tells me that if he is going to have a life outside of school we can not be together. But he promised that we would be friends if not more. We dont talk because he tells all of his friends that he hates me. I still and always will love him no matter what!
• Bubzarina
  I really liked this poem! Its in a way like me and my first love. My dad was always against our relationship and it made it harder to see eachother. Though thats not the only reason we broke up! I still miss him and we had a next time, though he also had a girlfriend and I hope there will be another next time just we only have eachother not somebody else!
• Jackie
  this was one of the best poems i have ever read i really liked it and you have a speacial talent! remember that your are very speacial
• Ashley
  This poem is really good. It shows how you feel about things in life. It shows how the author is really thinking about getting into a relationship. It shows the autthors thinking. Which really gets the reader excited. It's really great. It the # 1 poem in my weekily poem book.
• lynn
  i love this poem. it reminds me of my ex boyfriend and i want him back. it's a really nice poem. thank you.
• Lydia
  It was cute, it's nice to see a guy that's not afriad or embaressed by his emotions.
• Jay
  Dats hott man
• Annetta
  yeah i really think that peom was so nice i will give it a four becasue itwill touch a boy heart that you really love
• Lindsey
  WOW! i really liked your poem. Its the same way with me except I'm the girl whose parents don't want her to date. My mom HATES my current boyfriend. She had said that after I had broke up with my ex after 1 1/2 years that i was not to have a bf now that i do she hates him and i don't know what to do.
• shelby
  i personnaly loved this poem because i have a boyfriend and we've been going out for 3 weeks almostan this poem really spoke to me because i hope we stay together forever. great job!
• destiny
  WOW. that is exactly how i feel about the boy i want to be with so much. that was very good
• E147
  i really like this one, i want a girl back at school that i went out with before but not shes back with her old bf
• Sheena
  i voted for this poem for the reason that i sensed the guy's passion for the lady. there are many ladies out there but he chosed to wait for this certain girl. he must have loved the girl so much to wait for her. whew!
• Liane
  hi my name is liane and i have just read ur poem i found it a really nice piece of poetry as i have been in that situation with a lad b4 and it made me think a lot, good luck with the girl u deserve someone nice to lovexxxxxxxxx
• Lerox
  i really love the poem. it's really touching. please send some more poems.
• rosi
  i loved it it is a asome poem keep it up!
• tara
  this peom is so sweet i wish my boyfriend really felt this way about me you are the sweetest guy and she should love you for doing that and writing that peom.
• Aiza
  I do agree with you!You're such anice poet.
• Mariana
  hi, im 13 years old. i also write poems. and as a girl. i just love it wen guys write poems. and for a guy. ur poem "Next Time" was beautiful. i love how u put ur words together. good job. and keep on writing poems cus ur good at it.
• Trisha
  It was very touching and sweet! Good Job!
• Tersa
  I thinK That Thiz Poem iz reallI Good! It ReminDz Me Of My BoyFriend MAtt Hez i one Of a Kind
• Carlee
  First off, great poem, excellent. But let me tell you, you shouldnt have ended thingz cuz her parents had a thing about her having bfs, cuz thats how my parents are, but i still have a bf david (love you babe) you should have stayed with her till they approved, but great poem.
• Amanda
  your poem was really awesome! my boyfriend hates how my parents are always on my back and he always tells me if doesn't work out now it will when i'm older. next time. your poem touched me keep writing
• chelsie
  this is a great poem. i went through the same thing with the guy im in love with. josh if you see this i love you
• Tika
  your poem took my breath away if only everyone was as sweet as u!
• Kiersten
  That is an awesome poem! I know the feeling you have because I made a mistake and let my only love go, but I have to wait for him and hope he wants me back too.
• Viviana
  cool
• Ashanti
  I loved the poem I understand how you feel I'm still preety young and not able to have a boyfriend myself yet either but like I said I'm young so I know how you feel cause I get that all the time. But it was great keep writing.
• maisie
  this quote was amazing i can relate to it bad! im kinda going through that situation right now but with my boyfriend your poem has made me feel so much better knowing that someone else is going through it too!
• DOTY
  I LOVED IT. this poem describe my former girlfriend and i i truly loved her. this poem was great id give it a 10o outa a 1-10 scale and in fact she `ll be recinng this via her email.
• willow
  this poem shows that life brings unwelcome mistakes but it also shows that once you love someone you don't stop
• kendra
  yo, i liked your poem! I'm one of those females who's parents wont let them have boyfriends. I think that you wrote a very sweet poem. Keep ya head up!
• joselle
  ei! i like ur poem. please do another one!
• Sarah
  Wowie. this poem reminds me of a guy who ment ALOT to me. and broke up with me 2 days ago. i really want to renew our flame. so Aaron. I you're reading this. I love you
• Chris
  Hey! Kevin that is a really good poem it kicks lol. Hey dude keep up the good work
• Kasie
  Tht was a really good poem, it sounded like me but I was talking about a boy!
• troy
  AWESOME POEM DUDE!
• Sharel
  This poem reminded me of my first love. My parents wouldn't let me see a guy so we had to spilt up. He did so many bad things while I was away and when he tried to get me back I had already found out of the bad things he had done. I still love him to this day and will forever. But I would never take him back not now. He still loves me I can tell. but this poem i just wanted to let you know is very special. one thing is. keep on loving her. love never fades completly!
• Sandi
  i love your poem it is nice and sweet.
• Mark
  YO! Love the poem! I am in the same situation with my girlfriend and I hate it and want it to stop! I'll make sure to show it to her. and her parents! But one problem. they dun speak english! Keep writing! Adios!
• John
  Kevin i think that was a great poem and it reflects how i felt about my girl and hey if you keep at it you'll go far with her. i'd also ask that i use this for my english assignment. good work.
• Britt
  hey i like it
• Pooh
  Beautiful work and it makes me fill like i'm in that situation again.
• andre
  i love you pome and i like u
• misty
  I really liked this poem. it brought to me a reminder of someone i love.
• angie
  Kevin you hit home on this one. It happened to me when I was 16. I'm now 25 and I'm still trying to get back with the person. I will never give up intill he is mine forever.
• nat
  Your poem seems really moving, and I'm not saying that just to make you feel good, but its really good. I know a good poet when I see one. Good job!
• stacey
  I LOVED YOUR POEM! this poem relates to me and my boyfriend so much. im not allowed to have a boyfriend yet so our relationship is still a secret. he said hed wait as much as it took.
• tabatha
  Kevin, I just wanted to say that the poem was sweet and i was in the same situation but my parents finally seen how much the guy liked me and allowed me to date him im hoping that maybe her parents will see the same thing but if there not then i would have to say that you should wait because the best things are worth waiting for.
• nina
  I've been in this girl's position and my ex has been in urz. i think if you really like this girl then its worth the wait. and you know..if you prove to her that you do feel the way you say and will stick around you'll be sure to win her heart over. Much propz to you and this poem and good luck!
• Katy
  I think that this poem shows that no one leaves your heart and there can always be a next time...it's harder to cry then hold your head up high and this is his way of crying...it's Great!
• Arturo
  what is there to say,i LOVED THE POEM ,ITS GREAT,I can relate to that.LOVED IT!
• Lobo_Valiente
  hey man, i know what it feels like . i seriously wish you the best cuz dis has happned to me but its to late now to speak up. i better go cuz am crying.
• Elise
  That is the sweetest poem ever and i envy the girl it is about I really hope you two are together forever its nice to see guys feel this way for us girls your a real sweety!
• val
  i liked your poem alot i was in the same situation i'm the girl who can't date and lost this great guy who i really liked but let her reach her age and maybe you two can be.
• Nick
  I love this poem because it reflects what alot of people feel, including me, not being able to have someone because of restrictions or parents, or even because of unsure feelings. I give this poem a ten.
• Julie
  Kevin~ I think its really great that you feel this way about this girl.and i think its awesome that a guy can express his feelings this way. Most guys think the're too good for it or that its dumb. And i also think its great that you understand that her not being able to date you isnt her fault. You're one of the few good guys out there. Good Job.
• maja
  LOVE IT heaps cool!
• ASHLEY
  To read this poem it makes me look into my own relationship... it's so similar, except I am the girl feeling this. My parents played a major role in breaking my love up. Thanks, it makes me feel good to know that there are guys out in the world who can express their feelings so well, and keep it sweet while in the process. Thank you Kevin.